Chapter 1: oh wow, this was amazing. I loved this, this was easily one of the most beautiful Navi stories I've read in a long time~ Thanks so much for writing it, authornim~!!
Chapter 1: Kay this was awesome!! The rhythm and theie hesitations, seriously, nothing's rushed, nothing's crude. Just two guys discovreing each other. Thank you for this, I loved it!!! :D
Chapter 1: I like this because of how they develop. Its doesnt seem rushed, and they are extremely sweet in their own way.
Thank you for writing this!:)
Chapter 1: I love reading this story, it's become one of my favorites! It's so well done, and every time I read it I find myself doing so very slowly and carefully so I can envision every little detail. You've captured this idea perfectly ^^ I'll never get tired of looking at this fic
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