Chapter 1: In the conclusion paras, there should be some sort of explanation or justification for her friends to accept the cheater again. He just can't waltz into her life after cheating on the girl. At least, what's his excuse? This one-short is quite good except for the final paragraphs where there should be a little bit of a twist, or an explanation to justify his straying as it's not a misunderstanding on the girl's part. Now, the ending is a bit lame.