Chapter 1: This was so cute! When I first starting reading, I was kind of like "...where is this going to go," and a little worried. But then I read the rest and was darn near blushing by the end. I think that you have the potential to really evoke a lot of emotions out of your characters and then allow the readers to really sink their teeth into the story by doing so. This is good for your first fic. Quite an enjoyable read. :)
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