The eyes which hunt me

Description

His golden eyes shined brightly in the dark room. His breath came out as short puffs of air as he was busy glaring right into a set of purple eyes. He ran towards those purple eyes, which had been annoying him for quite some time now. He had spent a lot of time in that dark room, just running after that pair of eyes, over and over again. He growled angrily as the eyes once again moved at the last second, making him miss his target. 

Foreword

This is my first time posting anything so please let me know if I at writing fanfics... ^^

 

My english skills might too since it's not my mother language... Which is why I really want you to tell me if I make any mistakes , because I really want to get better!

 

To be honest, I'm extremely nervous about posting this... It's going to be the first time anyone reads one of my stories... If anyone reads it that is...

I'm going to post the first chapter tomorrow! Please let me know what you think (^_−)−☆

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Jongkey90
#1
Chapter 7: Update soon
Neci96 #2
Your story seems very interesting and I can't wait to read more!
Blingdom
#3
its really interesting please write more! ^^ I wanna see where this is going (btw I think u made a typo in the title (it should be eyes which hunt me I guess?)
inspiritdawn
#4
I liked this!
onlykeycanunlock #5
Chapter 1: İt sounds interesting :D I will be waiting for you next update :D please keep going~ <3