The melody in the night

Description

"From my boat
I can see your house
And when the lights are on
I can watch you move"

Foreword

This is a very short drabble inspired by the little poem Caline gave me. And it's comepletely for her. Caline, sorry if it's not what you wanted. The idea was perfect, hope you will like it)

From Taemin's POV

Comments

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saludlang #1
omo!! love it
taemin_is_my_love #2
The flow of this story is quite extraordinary! I admire you ability to continue a sentence without it becoming excessive despite the length. The characterization is also quite fascinating. Very nice!
SHINee4ever5 #3
I love it <3
Mistral
#4
beautiful!
valentina
#5
i loved it!!! it was incredible!!<br />
nice work!!!!
caline
#6
<3
SilverBlaze
#7
Wow, guys I've never heard of this group. and now I think I will get hooked on them, they are exactly my cup of tea, seriously. I'm gonna listen to them
lulunii
#8
I loved it!<br />
It's so brilliant! So touchy and beautiful, and amazing...<br />
I'm barely breathing right now~ <br />
Please, make more of this, you're so good!<br />
Please, I loved it so much~ *-*
dazlen #9
As soon as I read it I was like isn't that Mew's song? and yes it is ;~; I love Mew and I love this so much! <br />
Even though is small it tells such a beautiful story and the ending is very heartwarming.
caline
#10
Nooo, it's perfect like it is. The absence of paragraphs adds to the magic!