Sleep No More

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Sleep No More
"The love that lasts the longest is the love that can never be." S. Maugho
 
Zhang Yixing  Luhan  Huang Zitao 
Jongin Sehun Xiumin
Luhan, Lay, and Tao had no idea that the secret door could lead them to a life they never thought existed. The only way they can get back to their own time period is to found the exact door they went thru. The problem is the door can only be found inside the kingdom; a place they weren't allowed in. The boy's thought it was impossible to go back home until they discovered that the kingdom was looking for three servants; servants who could watch and tame the three princes that ruled the land. So, Luhan, Lay, and Tao decide to apply for the job in order to get back home, not knowing it will be the worse decision they will ever make.
 
The princes were three immature brats: one thinks to highly of him-self, one is a rebellious troublemaker, and the oldest, well, don't let his baby-face fool you. He's no saint.
 
Realizing the three princes are the same ones from their reaccuring dreams, the boys have a hard time fighting off unwanted feelings for the handsome men. Thus begins a story of three forbidden romances that won't end happily, just because of one door.
Beta-reader: sleeplessbeauty9

Foreword

 

Preview
A flower cannot blossom without sunshine, and man cannot live without love. - Max Muller

Deep in the dark forest, with small traces of light shimmering through the top branches, three bodies laid on the ground motionless. Suddenly, a pair of eyes slowly started to open.  As his eyes adjusted to his surroundings, he looked around with his panda-like eyes, growing wider and wider when he realized he had no clue as to where he was. 

“Where are we?” He shot up from the grassy surface. “How did we end up in a forest?” the panda-look alike questioned aloud. He wondered if he was dreaming right now. So, he decided to slap the first thing he saw and it just so happened to be his best friend face.

"YAH! Who slapped my manly face?!" a cute voice shouted, but somehow kept sleeping like nothing just happened.

Tao ignored the voice and kept slapping the cute face so he could wake up from this dream. "Wake up, Tao! Keep slapping Luhan, then you will wake up!" he kept saying to himself. He looked over his shoulder and noticed his other friend lying on the ground motionless as well. He reached over and shook his shoulder.

“Luhan, Lay, wake up!” Tao shook both of their arms trying to wake both of them up.

“Tao, shut your panda mouth or I will flush all of your panda stuffed animals and Gucci bags down the toilet.” Lay hissed and shoved Tao’s arm away.

Tao gasped. "Rude! I should be the one threaten you..." he mumbled as he returned his attention back to the eldest of the three, still trying to wake him up.

When Lay finally opened his eyes, and looked at his surroundings, he spoke the first thing that came into his mind. "Are we in unicorn land?" he said eagerly in hopes a magical unicorn would appear out of thin air.

"Sometimes I wonder why Lay is my best friend." Tao whispered while still trying to wake up the deer. "WAKE UP GEGE OR I WILL PUNCH YOUR PRECIOUS FACE!" he shouted into his ear.

Luhan finally woke up, and glared at the panda for ruining his precious beauty sleep. "WHAT?" he hissed.

"Look." Tao pointed and Luhan tiredly looked around. It took him a couple of second to process what he was looking at.

"3…2…1…"

“WHAT? Why are we in a forest?” Luhan shouted.

“I don't know! I should be asking you that. I know we're not dreaming...” Tao proclaimed.

“Were in a forest? Oh, I thought we were in unicorn land.” Lay innocently added.

"SHUT UP!" the both of them said, and Lay looked down at his hands and kept his mouth shut.

“Maybe we should look around and see where we’re are.” Luhan suggested. “Maybe we can find someone who can give us some direction on how to go back home.”

The other two nodded in agreement as the stood from the mossy grass. They began to wander around the forest to see if were any signs that could tell them how to get out of this unfamiliar forest. Unfortunately, after a while of searching, there were no clues.

"Are you sure we didn't sleep walk here?" Tao asked as he looked at the two boys.

Luhan scoffed, "Sleep walk? Are you serious? If we did that then I am scared of where we could go next if we were to sleep walk again." he answered. “Don’t be stupid.”

"You never know, we could have done that.” Lay added. “I hope we can get out here, because I'm hungry." he pouted while rubbing his growling stomach, trying to quiet it down.

They continued on in hopes of finding some kind of sign to help them, but as the forest seemed to never end, there hopes began to diminish. Suddenly, they heard shouting.

“Get them right now!” they heard someone shout. The three of them turned around and saw a group of guards on horses speeding towards them.

“You don’t think they are talking about us, right?” Tao asked.

“Get those three ladies.” They heard another shout and all three of their eyes widen.

"Ladies?" they all asked each other dumbfounded. They looked around to see if there were any females around them, but it was only them.

"GET THEM!" a loud shout was heard again. The three were getting very confused because there was no one around except for the three of them.

"What the heck are they talking about? There are no females around here." Luhan said. "And why does it seem like they were talking about us?"

"Because I think they are!” Tao shouted. “They’re coming right toward us!" he saw male guards, riding on horses galloping, with their swords raised in the air, moving toward them at full speed. And they didn't look too happy. "AHH!" he shouted and started running away, leaving the other two behind. He didn't want to die yet when he hasn’t said ‘bye’ to his panda collections and to his Gucci items.

"GET THEM!"

Lay and Luhan quickly followed Tao’s lead and began running away from the guards. “I think the ladies they are talking about are us. I think they think were ladies...” Lay shouted.

Luhan, who was right behind them, was a little pissed off that the guards for thinking he's a so called ‘lady'. Lady? How dare they think I'm a female? Didn't they see my manly face? He thought.

“Get those intruders! They could be spies.” They heard again.

“Spies?” Luhan mouthed to the others that were running beside him.

 

 

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ilabya8 #1
interesting
Miss_Logical
#2
The foreword was really interesting and funny specially with Tao running away first because he didn't say 'bye to his panda collections and Gucci items'! Plus, Luhan's thoughts about his manliness while running away was hilarious XD Think of your running away alive first before having those kind of thoughts haha
I wonder if Lay is as crazy as his friends... forget it, he was thinking they were in unicorn land so yeah craziness is everywhere haha I bet it'll be even worse once they'll meet the three princes! Oh gosh, I'm so looking forward their first meeting!! I'm sure there'll be a personality clash hehe

But, I wonder how they'll escape from the guards and if they'll discover why they were in this world...
So, I'm definitely looking forward this fanfic :)
FIGHTING!!
-lover #3
OMG~
I'm laughing my off with Tao running away before the others!
He's such a loyal friend *cough*cough*
Waiting for updates asap :D
Qian18 #4
LOOKING FORWARD FOR THIS! Omgee~ i can't imagine the otp hahahahaha~
taohunlover898 #5
Omg this is deabaek so good I was reading this while drinking bubble tea and I spit my bubble. Tea out
w-nwoo
#6
Hey~ I can beta if you'd like!
kyeopta_yeoja1633
#7
Update soon! I want to read your story! :D
code-breaker
#8
Congratulation *^*
MoroccanBlackDragon
#9
I don't want to be beta reader but I'll give u what I think of the fic, can I? It's good and all but please don't make Lay as a unicorn maniac, it's fun I admit but the story seem more action like, seriousness should be the main theme of their characters and add the cute / craziness from time to time to make the story funny, but don't overdo it or many won't finish the fic. I love the pairing, and I want to read it truly! like truly!
The foreword need some modification but I think that instead of finding a beta reader, reformulate better your phrases, like for example the first paragraphe, you can say instead:


"In the middle of the dense forest, Three male men were unconsciously laying in the humid ground until one of them blinked, opening his eyes on the new and unfamiliar view. The boy's eyes grew wider, looking frenetically around, as he realized that he wasn't where he was supposed to be and that there was no civilization in the sight."


That is just an idea but u are free to write it differently.