Attack

Captive

They had been hit and were losing altitude fast.

Lee Jongsuk could barely hear his pilot’s words over the roaring in his ears.  His heart thumped loudly against his ribcage as the plane shook and jerked its way down.  One of the wings had been damaged badly and was sending out streams of black smoke.  The controls in front of him flashed red and yellow as they spun faster and faster towards a mountain side.

This was it.  He had never expected that his life as a pilot would be so short-lived.  Having graduated from the Academy only months ago, he had been looking forward to finally becoming a seasoned pilot.  Each day in the air had felt exciting and flying with his main pilot had been simply thrilling.  Today, too, he had expected nothing but peaceful skies during his usual patrol.  None of them had expected a planned out attack from the enemy.

“Snap out of it Jongsuk!” his pilot roared as he tried to steer the falling plane, “We need to eject!”

Jongsuk felt his eyelids droop as the familiar sensation of unconsciousness washed over him.  He had tried his very best to avoid passing out but, alas, his experience was still too green.  As the mountainside approached, he felt his eyes roll to the back of his head.  He was numb with shock and as regret filled his heart, he succumbed to the darkness.


Author's notes:

Super short, I know!  This is more like the prologue of the story.  This part was in "Return to Base"; I highly recommend the movie!  LJS plays such a cutie in there!  More to come very soon!

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Snehamann #1
Chapter 12: Oh After so long Icame back to my comfort couple. I loved reading it
I-Queen-Buzz
#2
Chapter 12: It's been 5 years since i first read it and this story never gets old
Bojaemimo
#3
Chapter 12: Love it absolutely love it omg please write a sequel
dewyleaves #4
Chapter 12: I..I..don't know what to say nor find the best words to tell you how awesome, great, amazing, yet so well-written. I've never imagined I can land to this beautiful art TT
My heart is full with excitedment, sadness, and sobbing. How could you make this? Everything's perfect. The emotion, the plot, the detail. It is been awhile for me. I feel so satisfied TT
No one word can describe my feeling now author-nim. Let me cry in whatever feeling i have now
You are daebak (y)
Tingtingwook #5
Auther-nim! Pleasseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee write more jongbin fic!!!! The story is so creative and different frm othr jongbin fics, and the content is sooooooooooo beutiful im cryinggg. I read this for hell knows how many times, and you deserve a looooooot more readers, and maybe a prize! Auther-nim i begg you to write a sequel~~~ I can't sleep rn and im re-reading this fic again :))
latestTMMT #6
re-reading this ♡ I'm waiting for this to get featured, this story is so beautiful it needs more recognition. would upvote this thousand times if i could.
thanks for writing this author nim.
Skorpios22 #7
Chapter 12: I have lost count of how many times I have read this story. I love this ship. it's hard to find someone who can actually write good story's like this one. Author-Nim you need a golden star.
BaekYeolChanBaek
#8
Chapter 12: AHH
I DID NOT EXPECT THAT PLOT TWIST IN CHAPTER 11 WHOA
THIS WAS SO GOOD I AM GLAD I READ IT THANK YOU FOR WRITING IT ;;;;;
BaekYeolChanBaek
#9
okay i literally finished school 2013 yesterday so my heungsoon feelings have been e v e r y w h e r e and i'm about to start reading this fic (i am super excited) but i was N O T ready for those shirtless pics of them wowie
AsianKitten
#10
Chapter 12: Intense! Read it all at once and my heart is still thumping! I need to read more of your stuff. Thanks for your story.