One More Try

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Are you willing to give an another chance to someone who broke your heart?

 

For someone you became your everything but took you for granted.

 

Someone you can't live without with, but leaves you dumb headed?

 

And for someone you treasured most, but makes you like a trash.

 

Second Chances

 

 

Forgiveness

 

 

Forgetting

 

 

Three words- It is not hard to give a meaning but really hard to means it.

 

 

If everything is now based on LOVE---

 

 

It's now worth to have it

 

 

ONE MORE TRY....

 

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Just little inspired with a qoute I read last time. So that's it, another ideas pump out of my mind ^^ this story will be a  sad story, but I dont know if it's a one shot or short story haha, I'm just thinking of it until now ^^ . I'm sorry I'm really hooked with gminor that's why they were still the main characters here.

 

please support this one same as my another stories. ^^ 

 

 

Komawo ^^

 

 

 

 

 

Foreword

  

 

 

Characters:

 

                                                                                                   

 

 

 

      "How long do I need to take? just for you to come back?"

                                    

                                       -      Park Jiyeon

 

 

 

 

 

 

"Your asking for my forgiveness?, then prove me, that you are better for that one"

 

 

                                    

             -  Jung Jinwoon

 

 

 

 

"Now that you left him, there's no turning back again."

 

 

                      -Go Junhee

 

 

 

                                 

 

" I did not mean it, it just happened"

 

 

                                                -Key

 

 

 

Spoiler:

 

 

Priest: Jung Jinwoon, do you take Park Jiyeon for your lawful wife, to have and to hold, from this day forward, for better, for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and in health, until death do you part? 

 

Jinwoon: *with a plastered smile in his face*  I do. *he's face clearly printed the happiness* 

 

Priest: Park jiyeon,do you take Jung Jinwoon for your lawful husband, to have and to hold, from this day forward, for better, for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and in health, until death do you part? 

 

Long silence...

 

Priest: Again, Park jiyeon,do you take Jung Jinwoon for your lawful husband, to have and to hold, from this day forward, for better, for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and in health, until death do you part? 

 

Jiyeon: *who was just looking at the priest*

 

Crowd: *Chatting* *murmuring* *whispering*

 

Jinwoon: *pinch Jiyeon's hand that he was holding to get her attention* 

 

Jiyeon: *looks at Jinwoon with a sad facial expression* Mianhe, but---

 

 

Jinwoon: *eyebrow twitch*

 

Jiyeon: but--- i can't marry you *looks down, while running outside the church*

 

 

how hard to be left alone by the one you loved most?

 

And when she back, are you willing to give yourself  another try?

 

That's how they story will go on...

 

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hoho. Hello chingus ^^ what can you say about my new story? ^^ hehe. I will update this chapter soon, but please-- I need to hear opinions from you, can you leave a comment pretty please? Should I need to continue this? please leave a comment ^^ your comments are really means to me. Komawo ^^

 

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one more try chapter 28: the hardest thing is already updated ! please check it out

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bhebesha
#1
Chapter 31: Awww...now I'm taking back my words last chapter authormin, thank you...thank you for saving Jiyeon, thank you for bringing her back to Jinwoon...they truly deserves happiness for a long-long time and thank you for that...you really didn't disappoint me for the twist I've been asking for you (for thinking Jiyeon was gone) I even checked the last chapter for confusion because I thought she really did gone, but thank you for giving us the happy ending they truly deserves for (Jiyeon & Jinwoon)...thank you for this story...looking forward for more G-Minor stories from you.
Carinrina #2
Chapter 31: Congratulations!!!!!! and Thank you for an update plus finish the story
The story is beautiful will be waiting for your next update for the other story
ShainaloveTara #3
Chapter 31: Authornim Congrats you're so cool :'( you made me cry I never thought the ending will be like this. Thank you becoz you bring her back I really love this story. I hope you create more stories of jiyeon with t ara I miss them so much thank you.
unfortunately_ayu #4
Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Okay...this killed me. It's just so sad that Jiyeon didn't wake up, didn't had the chance to watch her daughter grow and be at her side. What happened is too painful for everyone, for Jinwoon and their daughter, her loved ones...but what killed me even more is the fact that Jiyeon's mother decided to let her go, it was too painful for someone who brought that person into this world to do that, imagine the immense pain it brought when she watched her child go before her when it's supposed to be the opposite. I feel sad for Lauren for not having her mother by her side as she grow up but I know that she is aware that her mother loves her even when she's not of this world anymore and that she is loved by the people around her. And...Jinwoon, to lose your other half is truly painful, it's like losing your life, he is brave to be able to carry on for his daughter, who became his source of happiness and who brought him back to life, to stand up as both a father and a mother to her. I don't love the ending actually but not all stories have happy endings...and there are also stories like this in real life. Thank you for sharing this beautifully tragic love story, Author-nim.
bhebesha
#5
Chapter 30: I hate you authornim :( Huhuhuhuhu, why would it end like that? Jiyeon and Jinwoon already suffered enough w/ her cancer way back, and they just getting started once again but you tore them apart once again, it breaks my heart too (esp. for Jinwoon part). He wasn't even given the chance to take care Ji the time she's suffering w/ her sickness (because they hide everything from him), and it's not even a year of happiness of getting back each other but you tore them apart again by accident? Why would they have to suffer more pain through out this story? I seriously love this story chingu...but seriously I can't really accept the fact that Ji (character) will gone after those fights and pain, it breaks me...really breaks me...huhuhuhu why? Please make it all just a DREAM please...please authornim give us a Big Twist for this one....huhuhu
Carinrina #6
Chapter 30: Oh my godddddddddd. It make me tear
Thank you for an update
bhebesha
#7
Chapter 29: Nooooo....please don't make it with a bad ending please (jebal I'm begging you) this is one of my favorite story ever read so please give up a happy ending for this one. We already cried a river for what happened on their lovestory, please don't let death of anyone tore them apart again, I won't take it...so I'm begging you authornim, save them and give us one picture of a happy family for this story.
Carinrina #8
Chapter 29: What happened to little Ji
Thank you for an update
ShainaloveTara #9
Chapter 29: I'm glad you came back authornim :-) hope you update again and what happen to jiyeon :'(
bhebesha
#10
Chapter 28: Thanks for the update chingu, that was a HOT SCENE, hehe....I'm blushing ^^