Chapter 1: I read your sequel ^^ I really like how they both grew up and how their relationship changed their lives. It's really good that they matured and gave up their former lives -- especially since they have important responsibilities now :D And imagining Kidoh as a dad is really cute! :)
I really like that you wrote a Kidoh story (I just started one for Valentine's Day). He's so talented! I really like how you did the text messages -- that was really creative how you wrote it, and I like that you included B-Bomb :) We can always use more Topp Dogg on here :D
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