Tangible

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After a long night of laughs and getting completely faced together, no one really knew what they were doing anymore. There was only that everyone was too close and breathing was mingled like it was the only thing they could ever inhale again. No one ever talked about it, what they were doing.

 

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mspeachykeen2012 #1
Chapter 1: I don't know how I didn't comment on this the first time I read it-- maybe because I was salivating and rushed to read the next thing you had posted. But I randomly thought of this today in the grocery store and how amazingly normal it felt reading this-- like, how this could actually be. I think about the stressors of an idol life a lot, it's where I get hung up on actually writing a non-au... which is why I never do, haha. But I guess what I mean is like, all they have is each other. As simple as that is, its so freaking huge and the way they look at and touch and love (is it love, you have to wonder but yes) each other in this fic is so eye opening. Whether this would ever happen or not, I am just blinking at my screen admiring the melancholy, the perseverance... I don't know, I'm still in awe of this piece.

I will not go on about the amazing detail imagery. Favorite line was Wonshik drowning in Taekwoon's water, choking on Jaehwan's honey... who gave you the right?

I am sorry it took so long to comment, but this was ing amazing. Still moving after a year and a half <3

Thank you :)
Shik_Taek
#2
Chapter 1: Wahh! I don't get the whole thing except the stress of being idols. And btw, you wrote amazingly.. :)
DevilNextToYou #3
Chapter 1: I dun exactly get the story
Can you explain to me please?
ObsessiveCat #4
Chapter 1: Love it. Beautifully written <3
hodeok
#5
Chapter 1: that was amazingly written and described! I love how you emphasized the "desperately" because it's kind of true as idols. aldklanoakx. amazing.
mahriane #6
Chapter 1: wow...that was amazing!