Mr. Strawberry Shortcake

Description

To her, he was like a strawberry shortcake. But she was not allowed to take a bite, because he was too sweet to be true. [YoonHae. Oneshot]

 

Summary :

Yoona had made herself Donghae’s girlfriend for a couple of months already. He was caring, he was sweet, he was the perfect boyfriend and everything she ever needed.  But as much as he liked her, she knew that he could never love her back, as Donghae still secretly loved Jessica. It was up to Yoona to fight for her very own strawberry shortcake or to give it to her beloved unnie. 

Foreword

Hello, my name is Pinboo and this is my first Kpop fanfic. I've been writing fanfic for quite a while, but this will be the 1st time I'm posting a Kpop-related fanfic. 

I'm open to all critics, suggestions, even flames. 

Notes:

I'm aware that in one of EHB’s episode, Donghae seemed to love cakes, but I read in one of the random facts, it said that he disliked sweet food. For the sake of the story, just consider for once that he truly disliked sweet food, okay?

Perhaps it’ll be more interesting if I tweak Donghae’s personality, but sometimes I just can’t. I think he’s the most gentleman one out of all Suju members and I always envision him as one.

This story is reviewed by: nikgarry and the review can be seen here. By the way, thank you very much, Reader G!

Comments

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Krystalocked
#1
Chapter 1: *sigh* It's sweet.
Va_asianloverz
#2
Chapter 1: it is a nice chapter
please write more
roodlesnamen
#3
Chapter 1: Aw, tears in my eyes. Such a sad, but sweet fanfic. ^_^
Min_Galaxy
#4
Chapter 1: I'm still reading this over and over again. *sobs* such a nice fanfic! ((even though it's a sad ending for this fic))
Lollipopsicles #5
Chapter 1: yeah. yeah. pinboo! We want a sequel, gurl. :-) preeeetty pwueeese?! *sniff sniff*
brinagirl
#6
Chapter 1: damn. im tearing up. this is was really bittersweet but really good!
nerdscandy #7
OMGGGG WHYYYYYYYY???????
Alright, that's all I can say because I'm in desperate need of the sequel right now! I promise to leave a longer and better comment on that :)
memoire- #8
Sad...there is a sequel to this right? T.T
1380MC #9
its so sad, the way you write yoona's feeling just get to me.