Give into the Night

Description

The heart is fragile. Daesung's heart is breaking and the only one who can possibly mend it is the one who's tearing it apart piece by piece.

Foreword

Eeh, why, hello! I'm still somewhat new to this website and I know nothing about posting things here (tags, characters, layout... I know nothing. It even took me three months to figure out what that black box thingy in the side was for and what those "New somethingsomething!" meant).

Anyways, this fic is slightly inspired by Disturbed with The Night. Not the lyrics per se, although the title is taken from the lyrics (give into the night). Besides that one sentence, this hasn't really anything to do with the song. I simply happen to love the song and the, err, mood and I got the idea for this while listening to the song.

This is going to be a DaeBae (Kang Daesung x Dong Youngbae from Bigbang) fanfic, but the first chapter can more or less be about anyone, ha. Ah, and, eh, it is probably very ooc. But what do any of us know? Oh well.

First chapter is short, but it's more of an intro than a chapter, really, so fear not; chapters following Chapter One will be longer. I don't know how many chapters there'll be or when they'll be uploaded, though... And it's probably not going to be so angsty as the first chapter might suggest. Ah, well, who knows (certainly not me).

Daesung and Youngbae is a pairing that I adore, but oh-! There are a worrying lack of Daebae fanfics out there. I've read everything I could find. Sob. So, I'm going to do my utmost best to get more Daebae shippers!

Oh, and also do note that English is not my first language. If you spot a mistake, feel free to notify me!

... I think that's all. Have fun and tell me what you think!

Nathalaia
First: I don't know how this works. This'll be fun, yaaay. Second: I'm soooo sorry! I've begun writing the last chapter, so it'll be up soon! Promise! (3/6-14)

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ILuvToDae #1
Chapter 5: This. I feel almost torn because I think this gentle ending is perfect. Yet I find myself wanting more. I'm so demanding. X-D
ILuvToDae #2
Chapter 4: I have to say that I love your metaphors.
You will bloom again, Daesung!
ILuvToDae #3
Chapter 2: This story absolutely jerks at my heart strings. And I could hear TOP's song Act Like Nothing's Wrong playing in my mind the whole time I read this chapter. <\3
SunDaeDreamz
#4
I stil adore this story. I come back and read it often when I need a good heart-wrenching story with a heart soothing ending.
SunDaeDreamz
#5
Chapter 5: I absolutely love this story. It wrenched my heart to pieces and slowly put it back together. I am so glad that Dae gave Youngbae another chance.
camsairen
#6
Chapter 5: Perfect story.
KPVIP26
#7
Chapter 5: i loved it, you do angst almost as good as ayaachan. can u please read my Big Bang fanfics, i have a couple of oneshots and i need feedback on them, lemme know what u think. Kamsamnida
Lyzbog
#8
Chapter 5: Wow.. oh.. so.. I can't find my words. I was expecting a completely different solution for Bae's and Dae's situation, but to tell the truth this version is much more amazing! You suprised me, I was afraid that you give a too romantic end to it, but I see you're better than I first thought.

About OC's. I think they're like the real members of BB. Of course, I don't know what the real people are like, but I imagine them like the people in your story. Their personality matches with the personalities I've imagined of the real members.

What is that: if you were to write? ._. I really, really hope you won't finish writing, because you're extremely talented! And where else do you upload these stories? Or am I just misandurstanding it?^^" Anyways.. I really like these angst&hurt/comfort&romance stories from you, but I wouldn't mind reading a lot others with more angst^^ But I'm quite curious of what crime stories you can write. Fantasy.. I'm reading a fantasy story of BB and it's just enough for me, I like the normal fanfics with complications more. But it can be that he/she's not as a good writer as you, yours might be much more interesting. And fairy tales are perfectly fine by me^^

Woahh, Daesung as a prince? It sounds more than exciting! Ohh, I want those fanfics *o* Will you update it?

You want words/songtitles? I can gladly give you some ideas^^ Yiruma - Moonlight (somebody playing on the piano*o*), Bruno Mars - Talking To The Moon, Ne-Yo - Beautiful Monster, Nelly - Just A Dream, Tatu - Not Gonna Get Us (thinking of crime [running fron the police or sth.] or romance [others won't get to know of the relationship or sth.]), Within Temptation - What Have You Done (crime or romance [sb hurts sb's feelings and realises it or sth.]), Mission Impossible theme song^^, Evanescence - My Immortal, Taeyang - Eyes, Nose, Lips *o* and I have plenty of more ideas. I have word ideas too, but the comment is too long from here.xd

You're amazing*o* one of my two favourite authors.
xtavista #9
Chapter 5: love the ending..and i'd like to see more of your writing.
i love any pairing with Dae^^
but wouldn't mind other bb pairing. Dae is just my bias;))