This Perfect World

Description

It was an imperfect romance of two in a perfect world of three.

 

Title: This Perfect World

Author: immortalsoul123

Type: One-Shot

Overall Rating: PG-13

Themes: High School, Love, Friendship, 

Genres: Romance, AU, Light Drama

Warning: BL

Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters. Only the plot is mine.

Foreword

Hi... I just felt the need to write this tonight. I planned to write it in Filipino but I changed my mind. I would actually do that after.

I was randomly thinking about some... things and then I thought of this. I hope you would like this.

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IvaLura #1
Chapter 2: Jani so cute in this story :)
ishipyunjae #2
Chapter 2: This story is very nice.. thanks for writing :)
Jia_Yi #3
Chapter 2: this is so perfect <3
droplets #4
Chapter 2: this is so perfect ;;
iriskeo #5
Chapter 2: may i ask you...
does boy x boy love is actually not a true love.. is it actually only lust and for ?
TheCuteTofu #6
Chapter 2: I loved how you used the girl to narrate the story between Jaehwan and Taekwoon. One of the best Keo fics I've read! I hope you'll write more like this!
CASIGO #7
Chapter 2: ONE OF THE BEST STORIES EVER ! ..so beautiful
purpl3cherry #8
Chapter 2: NO! This is not random. This piece is....BEAUTIFUL!

I dunno, I just like the way you use the girl to portray the situation between Taekwoon and Jaehwan. Somehow it feels like that it was myself in the place of the girl, seeing and feeling with my own. Yeah, I do feel a slight heartbreak when the girl (or at this point 'myself') have to let go Taekwoon for Jaehwan.
But then again, this is a Keo fic. So my heartbreak feeling just for a while and i would go 100% wishing that Keo would happy in the future. Yeah, me being a total Keo-shipper, lol.

Thanks for writing this. I hope my comment doesn't make you confuse ^^
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