Chapter 1: Awww, we don't get to hear about Key and Tamin's date? <333

Chapter 1: ... this actually seems incredibly accurate on Key's part. Find a boy about to get ? Why not adopt him? He's just really a sweet person, end most fics seem to focus on the more blunk and or ual sides of him. I love this!

Chapter 1: This was sooo good omgosh I love Key's personality in this story and how he was so sweet and gentle to Taemin, and Taemin kissing him on the cheek was so cute <3 <3 Him showing his appreciation and gratitude
How you describe everything and the flow of the story was really well done, it is so realistic too.
This has definitely become one of my favourite keytae oneshot! Wish there was more good keytae stories around >.<

Chapter 1: This sends such a great message to readers who can relate and you presented the issue of ual abuse so wonderfully ^~^
I like how you ended with just a small innocent kiss on the cheek and it made me feel like it was all the more realistic capturing taemins timid-ness and appreciation towards kibum. Theres too many fictions where they end something like this with heavy and its way too unbelievable and so romanticized because no one who experiences that can bear any sort of heavy intimate contact.

Any who~ well done c: well written.

Chapter 1: This is just beautiful. I adore the personality you wrote for Key so much, and it couldn't make me happier how he stood up for Taemin and cared for him. This sends out a great message, too. Thank you for sharing such a lovely story.

Chapter 1: Oh mai gawd that dat was SO cute!!!!!!!!! I love KeyTae so much and this one shot was just PERFECT for it!!!!!!!

Chapter 1: love the story fro THE IDEA behind the plot!

Chapter 1: This was just fantastic. You describe emotions and setting very well. It was so well written and engaging I couldn't stop reading at all. I when from chill to a bit sad to a little annoyed at Hyunsik to smiling at Kibum to fearful for Teamin to proud to just plain happiness. You really hooked me. Kibum in here is pure love and awesome. Loved how you wrote all the characters truly. I wish we had more fantastic taekey fics like this. It was so good

Chapter 1: Hi!

This was such a great story, and I've re-read it three times already.

The whole story is generally well-written, but the part where Hyunsik comes on to Taemin in the VIP room is just perfection (jesus, I sound like a ert). You've managed to capture that gradual escalation from annoyance to disgust to fear and finally to outright desperation. These words especially rang true "...Taemin was not a weak person. He could handle himself well enough, and he always managed to get out of any sticky situation. But what was he to do now?..." because that is exactly what it's like in real life.

And because of the utter, almost-painful realness of the situation, you just end up loving Kibum all the more when he comes to Taemin's rescue, because which of us hasn't hoped for someone like that to save us? To notice that something's wrong and have the guts to do something about it?

And just when I thought you were done being such a wonderful author, you go and write about Taemin's embarrassment and his attempt to shrug off Kibum's help - so, so real (I keep using this word, but nothing else works better).

I'd have to say that the bit where Kibum tells Taemin that it's not his fault felt like it was taken from a paper or off tumblr, but I can see why you'd want that in the story and why it's so important for victims of ual assault to hear that it's absolutely not their fault.

Just beautiful :)

Chapter 1: hyunshik is such an but i'm really happy that he wasn't able to get what he wanted from taemin. and also for the fact that key got in before anything gets to happen. by the way, jonghyun's personality is so adorable that i couldn't help but find really funny! i wish i have a best friend like him but not super whiny of course. anyway, it's nice to read a different kind of start of something new for taekey~