cool story

interesting!

Chapter 4: Omg it seems like your writing about me because I am a combination of both female character I love this story it's different and I like that update soon

Chapter 4: Ok so i read it already :3 and awesome
Just love it and I love Jinhee's character she is just so wierd like a person different than the other ones xD such great character you have here. I'm happy you were finally able to do the sequel & come back and can't wait for the next chapter to come really cx!!! Jajja don't know what to really say i'm just happy and exited about this story
You could say i've been waiting for ir cx
So thanks for the updates

Chapter 4: Wah~ I've followed you since the last story Author-nim!! I hope this one will be really thrilling as you stated^^ keep up the good work!!!

Chapter 3: You got some great characters so far. I like how GD is portrayed and the issues he struggles with. It seems like something a lot of idols would think about internally in reality. As for Jinhee... she reminds me of you. I see glimpses of your manner of speaking in her.

So... critiques. Your dialogue in the first chapter is very filler. Especially the second half with Patricia (who's concept I really like too). It could've easily been paraphrased instead. I also thought GD's reaction to hitting the "bear" was unrealistic. He's an idol. He should be thinking about the consequences, especially since this could've easily killed the man and he would be sent to prison. So... it's not just an idol dilemma. Unless there was something that happened in the past or something that absolutely compelled him to do so. And... I think it's weird Jinhee is spilling her secrets to a stranger and I think it's weirder that you know this and still choose to incorporate it in the story. Somehow, I think I would've liked it better if the tragic back story was revealed later when they got closer.

Anyhow, great start so far! I can't wait to see what comes out of this idea.

OMG YES FINALLY YOU'RE BACKKKKKKKK. CONGRATS ON FINALLY FINISHING YOUR EXAMS! Hahahahah I actually already read from GANJ! about the sequel but I didn't have time to come and take a look but then you reminded me again on my wall about the sequel and so here I am!!!! HEHEHEH. I hope this won't get too dark because ASKJDWKAJD Jinhee deserves happiness and I know you're not exactly following the storyline of GANJ! but I really shipped JinheeXJiyong and SeungriXHana so I hope I see their moments here even though it's gonna be dark romance.

ANYWAYS, I'M GONNA GO SUBSCRIBE NOW AND YOU SHALL SEE MORE OF MY COMMENTS ALONG THE WAY AUTHORNIM MUAHAHHAHA. THANKS FOR THE SEQUEL I LOVE YOUUUUU~!

Chapter 2: This is so unique and mysterious -- I love the way you write! :)

I checked out the description of the prequel of this story and it looked like romcom. And this... sounds like a thriller. How interesting.