Cinderella's Twist Story ( It's about Twins though ) -[EDITING !] [WILL BE CONTINUED !]

Description

Once upon a time, Cinderella live with her stepmother and twin stepsisters in a mansion. They were a happy family before the father died due to heart attack because of his debts to loan sharks. Since her father's death, Cinderella was treated by her stepmother unfairly, including the twins. They would make her do all the chores in the mansion and weed the plants outside the garden. To put it simple, Cinderella is the maid and gardener or even more likely a slave to the family. 

That's would be more like the fairy tales that we ever heard or mostly me who mixed it up.

 

 

Foreword

In the 21st century, Luhan still could not understand why he and his twin were given plain rice mixed with salt and tap water. Both of them have to wake early in the morning and clean the horse stable which modern people in the town couldn't afford because it's pricey and they are lacking of space.

 

"Luhannie!"

His twin frowns and throws an old damp rag to his beautiful face.

"Yah, don't just throw it to me! It has harmful germs or bad bacterias that will cause pimples on this precious face." Luhan continues to babble.

His twin gags. "You gotta be kidding me." He mumbles as he start to rake dried leaves.

"Am not!" Luhan puffs his cheeks. "I wish I have a fairy godmother with me like how Cinderella has." He mutters under his breath.

"Me too, Luhannie," his twin nods. "But, the Cinderella is Niel. Not us, we're just his step brothers." He shrugs and continue to rake.

"How that even be a fate?" Luhan shrieks. His twin looks at him with a confusion smeared on his face.

"What fate?"

Luhan shakes his twin's shoulder numerously. "Don't you get it? We are like in Cinderella's story except that the one who becomes Cinderella is that thick fish lips, other than that, the things are normal!"

His twin holds Luhan's shoulder for support. "You are making me dizzy." He rubs his temple. " But in the story, we supposed to have a mother and become bad."

Luhan pouts. "How I hate the story. Shouldn't they made a story too about us without mother?"

"What did you say?"

"Look! In here, Niel is the Cinderella while us his step brothers and his Mom is our step mother. Could you figure it out yet?"

His twin lets out an audible sigh. " You mean, despite the Cinderella's story, it will become our story. More like a twisted one?"

"Of course!" Luhan jumps. "In that way, we'll have our own fairy godmother," he smiled cheekily.

"Yah! Stop fooling around and start doing the work." Niel puts his hands on his waist in front of the stable's door.

Both of them start to do their job after being startled by oh so kind Niel.

"Hey," Luhan nudges his twin. "So, what did you think?"

"Uhm," His twin moves his head left and right. " I don't know."

"Chanhee," Luhan pouts. "Just think!"

 

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love_me_love_kpop
#1
Chapter 2: Just a few editings mistakes, plus some incomplete sentences and missing words. Otherwise... Yay!
love_me_love_kpop
#2
CHUNJOE AND HUNHAN IN THE SAME FIC?!?!?!? WHAT IS THIS MADNESS?!
MY TWO FAVE SHIPS... TOGETHER?! MY BRAIN JUST EXPLODED.
KpopSumii
#3
Chapter 12: Continue! It's really good and funny XD
ayumi13
#4
Chapter 11: Omo aww poor luhAn and chunji
Byungchan_angel #5
Chapter 11: Hyungseung and Hyuna already together >.< Can't wait for the next chapter cause I want to know who call Chanhee and Luhan XD hahaha
Byungchan_angel #6
Chapter 10: Chanhee slap Luhan? hahaha >.<..
Here we go, Ricky and Niel evil plan will come soon..haha
Byungchan_angel #7
Chapter 9: HunHan!!! Love it <3
ayumi13
#8
Chapter 9: OMG what then whst about chunji?
Jongie_00 #9
Chapter 8: Hahaha . . Poor Luhan and Chanhee ~
I hope she will be allright :)
ayumi13
#10
Chapter 8: i knew it soo cuutee and aww i hope she is okay!