Protect Her~

Description

Wassup to Inspirit and Aleeans out there.Here,I brought to you my second fic.Hope you enjoy it and please comment.Sorry for my grammar mistakes because English is not my first language.^_^

Foreword

(Ailee's Pov)

"Omma,I'm hungry,waaaa!!" I look at my brother that crying because do not eat for 4 days.

"Omma doesn't have food kid,we don't have money to buy food." I heard my mom said to my brother while crying.

 

 

"Omma,I will go out to look for leftover food at the restaurant nearby." I said to my mom and get out from my house immediately. "I have to find way to make money.We can't stay like this forever.But how?" I mumbled alone while walking towards the restaurant in a cold weather.My walk stop about 10 metres from the restaurant as I heard the owner is scolding me.

 

 

"Hey! You again! Get lost! I don't have a leftover food! Get lost,beggar!"

 

 

"What are you talking about?! I just want to take a fresh air. And one more thing, I'm not a beggar!!" I shout loudly and run away from that place. Without knowing,my tears fall down. •••••••••••••••••••••••••••••

 

 

Since that day Ailee,move to Korea to work because in America she doesn't has a chance to work because people in America is too much.

 

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inspirit2woo
sorry for the late update.. My homeworks are too much. I dont have time to write the fic..

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Estherbunny #1
Chapter 14: Update soonn~
Amongpongs
#2
i really this story sooo when is the next update...????????????
inspirit2woo #3
Please comment^^ hoho
Amongpongs
#4
please update soon.....love the story...
Amongpongs
#5
Chapter 10: Story is getting interesting keep it up and update soon authorNim
peonelopie4 #6
Chapter 7: Can I recommend that you have a line space after each dialogue? To change the format?
That_Inspirit #7
There are not that many aileexinfinite fics out here and I just want to say thank you! I like your story btw!~
z_nrn_ #8
Chapter 4: It's good. I hope you continue it! Don't lose your motivation just because there is no comments!! Though it could be better. If you're easily hurt don't continue to read!!

I don't get Ailee. For example she is poor but she has a phone? And has money to get on a plane to Korea?
Another thing is no one will straight out reject you for a job. That is extremely rude. They would say something like this 'please call back in a few days.....blah blah blah'
I guess what I dislike is it isn't realistic but other than that it's good. I don't know where this is heading but I'm sure you will create a wonderful story.

Sorry!
inspirit2woo #9
Please comment!! I'm so bored