Chapter 1: What are you saying ? It's good !!
I like the story you have come up with, light and happy ^^ I've never read SHINee fanfics before so it's a new experience for me to imagine the boys.
Onew is so playful, hahaha. It's so funny. And Taemin, cheating ? WOW XD I Would have never thought of that !!
But really, it's good. Although there are little spelling mistakes, don't say it's bad !!
I like it !! I wish it was longer but since you agreed this oneshot request, I can't complain =P
THANK YOU SO MUCH !!!! IT MEANS A LOT <33333
And it's fine for the Christmas theme >.<

Chapter 2: Awwww fdhhfghsfgsdf!!! This is too darn cute! Loved it XD GAH! It made me smile like an idiot I am X)

Chapter 3: Thank you for writing this for me^^ I don't like, BUT love it! <3

Chapter 4: tq 4 accepting my request. da story not end here right? the plot is good and i think u get what i want in da story. hope it will be great story. gud luck with ur story.