❝ 二;Applicants

❝ Astral || SM Entertaiment 'Special' New Girlgroup || Apply Open ❞


[application counts: 15]

 

   december 16th         1993.         20      hallucikinesis      yu rim  .      kris wu   

  ohsena.   ]
chosen.
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so this is my character. oh sehun older sister:) hope you like her!
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profile credit : harlequin.

 

 

   december 2nd        1996.           17       omnitone    park seul .     kim jongdae   

  zhangjialing.   ]
accepted.
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it's funny how you use changmin as your sm mentor. it suits your power very well, yeah because of changmin's voice hehe :) and just one question, who is 'heerin' you mentioned at your interaction with jongdae? just that. after you answer that question you would be in the accepted list. overall, your app is good and thanks for apply!
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profile credit : harlequin.

 

 

   june 7th        1994.           19       potentikinesis      byeon seo eun  .      park chanyeol   

  hanjimin.   ]
accepted.
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i was surprised when i see you use byeon seo eun as your ulzzang. why? because i plan to use her before hehe. go to your app, wow at your power. overall, i dont see anything wrong at your app so great then. Thanks for apply!
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profile credit : harlequin.

 

 

  december 8th       1996.           17        menekinesis    mint .     huang zi tao   

  jangjaeyeong.   ]
accepted.
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tao as your love interest<3 huehue i just love it. but can you add little more in your interaction with tao? that's it. i'll put you in the accepted list when you already add that :) thanks for apply! 
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   december 8th        1996.           17       heliokinesis      park chom mi  .      kim jongdae   

  jangjaemi.   ]
accepted.
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ohoho at your love rival. my kwangminnie <3 /slapped. okay im going to use him at first but because the , i change it otl. but i cant swear to you that i will choose both of them, 'kay? it depends on the number of the applicants. so maybe i would pick both of the twins or just one of them :) thanks for apply!
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profile credit : harlequin.

 

 

 August, 16th       1991.        22     omnikinesis    kim seuk hye .     kim joonmyeon  

  hwangyoojin.   ]
accepted.
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Hello there. Thanks for being older than 17! Thanks thanks like thanks! <3 Go to your app, what is 'aether' you mentioned in your power explanation? Weather? Hehe. And for your sm mentor, is it okay if i just use kyuhyun for your mentor? bcs changmin already 'used' by one of the applicant, hehe:) Anyway, thanks for apply!
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   February 14th        1993.         20       adomopathy     ann .    oh sehun  

  shinsoonei.   ]
pending.
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go to your app, can you explain what is the 'physical' power you mentioned at your power explanation? because im afraid that our power (you and me) are same. so i'm sorry. and can you add some more interaction between you and leo? and thanks for use one ulzzang that i never heard before<3 Anyway, thanks for apply! one more thing, can you explain more of your telekinesis? because your explanation about it is just lack of information. i dont really get it what 'telekinesis' means. thanks! 
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   december 13th        1993.        20     shapeshifter    sin bi .    do kyungsoo   

  petaannagreen.   ]
accepted.
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i found your name is unique. How to pronounce 'peta'? ohoho no it's stupid question. okay go to your app, i love your interaction with squishy kyungsoo<3 i just love it. how sweet. and changjo as love rival (again). overall your app is great and thanks for apply!
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  december 31th        1994.        19      mystiokinesis     park hwan hui  .     oh sehun  

  junghaerin.   ]
accepted.
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i love your power<3 especially the 'turn other people into animals' please dont do it to my character, okay? x)  just one thing, can you use just one of your mentor? because three mentor is kind of, overboard? because one person just need one mentor, i think. Overall, your app is great and thanks for apply!
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 december 21th      1995.           18        weather manipulation    kim seuk hye .     oh sehun   

  jungraein.   ]
accepted.
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wow sehun receive so much love<3 proud for my brother/slapped. okay so, can you add more interaction between you and sehun and also between you and chunji? because i think it really short and lack for information/? i'm really sorry. Ah and also add more traits, please? minimum five traits. Thanks for apply<3!
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  may 13th       1994.        19      psionic manipulation      park hye min  .    lu han   

  choiheeyeon.   ]
accepted.
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wow at your power. almost same with mine but i understand that your power is just 'physic', rite? okay then /slapped. i really like your app, it was detailed. it's funny how luhan was scared of her when sehun introduce her to him<3 thanks for apply!
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   june 27th         1994.         19      power cosmic     kim do hee  .     kim jong in   

  shinhana.   ]
pending.
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hello there. i dont really get your power, so can you PM me example of power cosmic use? and also please add more traits in your personality. two isn't enough. and can you add more interaction between you and your love interest and also love rival? because it's to lack for information. like, i understand that she and kai always fight, but you can add the reason why they always fight. and you can add why hoya threat hana like his dongsaeng. simple as that. i think that's it. thanks for apply! oh and btw, is your power is 'power cosmic' as stated at the power section or 'mind control'? you write both of them there. 
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   december 5th        1993.          20      mind reader    lee jung ha .    jung jinyoung   

  jungchanmin.   ]
accepted.
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first, is it okay for you if i change your ulzzang into the backup one? because lee jung ha has not so many HQ photo. go to your app, wow a mind reader. and also jinyoung as love interest. ah and can you add just little more traits into your personality? minimum of five. thanks:) AND PLEASE FOR ALL APPLICANTS, STOP BORN IN DECEMBER. REALLY STOP. ANOTHER MONTHS NEED LOVE TO.
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  june 26th        1996.         17       mind control     ryu hye ju  .     kim jong in  

  leehojung.   ]
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cool, mind control. and btw, i like your interaction with kai hehe. thanks for apply! your app is great!
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  may 8th       1995.           18       empathy    lee eun ji .     huang zi tao   

  matsuyomayuyu.   ]
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wow a japanese one. btw, i see that you dont put 'korean' as your language. even you're birthplace or hometown is not korea, but please state korea in your language. at least conversational. because you need to talk to the trainee and members, rite? that's it. overall your app is detailed. thanks for apply!
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  december 24th        1994.         19      etherkinesis    su eun .   byun baekhyun 

  choiminjae.   ]
accepted.
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december peepur again /lesigh. there's just too much december otl. and wow at your power. i like your interactio with baekhyun and there's nothing wrong at your app so good luck! thanks for apply!
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seondara #1
Chapter 2: there's nothing wrong about mine?
thank you so much <3
guanheng
#2
Chapter 2: well i'm glad that there is nothing wrong about my app.
i am like sweating by just thinking of your comment.
good luck with astral \(^o^)/
melisa_chan
#3
Chapter 2: I've added my personality, hehe... here is the link http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/750932
quewien58
#4
Chapter 2: edited, authornim kkk I hope it's accepted now~ <3
SapphireBlue91
#5
Chapter 2: okay, i'm fine with kyuhyun... huhu^^

and for the power thing, i don't know how to explain the meaning of aether because it's too difficult... but, in short way, it means universe...
windsehun
#6
Chapter 2: I had fixed my mistake ^^
ElleAlstreim #7
caecie
#8
Chapter 3: I saw all the birthdates and was like "Oh dear lord... maybe I shouldn't have used my actual birthday month and day." Its kind of hilarious though.
Oh and if you want I can change the rival.
hommage #9
Chapter 2: oh, and i've fixed my mistakes