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Wished Hopes

My job was simpler than expected.

I'm glad I get to enjoy the peace and serenity in my workplace, I'm the type of person that prefers silence over noise.

Although, yes, I can be a bit noisy sometimes.

Since like.. A few days ago? I've been working part-time as a librarian now, and nothing satisfies me more than people walking in and out of the library, children with a look of amusement on their faces upon flipping pages of colorful books, teens' eyes getting absorbed into stories—it all really is pleasing. To find many more people falling in love with books of another world.

Until I fell in love with a girl at first sight.

I would usually watch from the counter as the short-haired brunette walked in through the entrance, her favorite chocolate brown sling bag hanging over her shoulders that's usually covered with a dull-colored pullover(which I had to admit, she looks a million times more attractive in that freaking grey pullover than when usual people wear them), while she turned left and made her way to the Fiction section of the library.

"Jiyeon-ah,"

"Yeah?" Thoughts interrupted, I turned around at the voice of one of the other librarians, Hyomin.

"Soyeon's on leave today. Would you mind arranging the books in her place?"

What mere coincidence, most of the organizing Soyeon unni does is at the Fiction section.

"Sure thing," I beamed, all my cheery thoughts on interacting with that one brunette showing on my face.

Good thing Hyomin was oblivious, and she left me alone for today's work.

I exited the counter and proceeded to get a partially-filled book trolley for Fiction books and pushed it over to the assigned area.

The tables and chairs around the Fiction shelves were occupied with mainly teenagers studying or finishing homework, so they didn't bother me suddenly pulling a trolley into the place. The only problem was—

There was barely any people browsing the shelves, so I was bound to bump into that brunette.

I stopped the trolley in front of one of the shelves and organised the untidy books in the trolley itself, arranging itself by its alphabetical code. From time to time I had to raise my gaze in hopes of spotting that brunette and my hopes would crash each time.

She's probably browsing at a different Fiction shelf that I'm currently at, I prayed.

I lowered my gaze for the last time before picking up a number of books and brought them into an aisle. I continued my job and threw those thoughts about that girl away.

Needless to say I was a bit disappointed. I always knew some readers would try avoiding going into aisles with librarians sorting books in the middle of them, I didn't know why, afraid of being judged, probably? Or afraid of getting into trouble with them, or—

"Hi, uh, do you know where Catching Fire can be found at?"

Was that.. Her? Because her voice sounded lower and more feminine than I expected..

Maybe because it was a whisper.

I turned my head and my face met with a shorter woman's, and at first glance I knew this wasn't the person I was looking for. I flashed the reader a smile to hide my frustration.

"Suzanne Collins, right? It should be in the 'S' category by the author's name, then."

I was confident that I hadn't dropped hints of my real mood as the woman still had a cheery(but soft) tone to her response. "Ah, I forgot who the author was!" She let out a soft laugh and thanked me before following my directions to her desired book.

A smile remained on my face until the woman was out of sight and my face turned back to its serious state. I quickly returned to focus on my job.

I continued with it silently until about a few minutes later, I felt a presence beside me. I turned to acknowledge it.

It was that brunette girl. And she stood, like, less than a metre away from me.

Her eyes skimmed through the different titles of books through her black, framed glasses on the shelves as she probed interesting titles from them.
She seemed literally perfect, the way she has a hand on her bag, the way she shifts her eyes left to right to find that absolute book, the look of concentration on her face as she was struggling finding good books to read—

She looked my way.

She must've noticed me checking her out—. I turned away quickly.

I heard her laugh. No.

Oh god, the embarrassment. I went back to do my job.

I continued shelving the books casually, still afraid that the girl would choose to make a move on me(yet also afraid that she wouldn't, because damn, this could be the only chance!). I moved around the aisle as I put books into their respective shelves while she.. She didn't move much. Only continued scanning the shelves for books.

It was pretty disturbing that she didn't roam around the aisle, but I tried not to let it affect me.

I had to walk beside her to shelf one of the last few books, and I could seriously feel her glare on me.

I snuck a glare back, though, and realized that she wasn't exactly looking at me.

She was looking at the bracelet on my left wrist, which was engraved with my name on it.

Is she going to try to talk to me?

I went to shelf more books, leaving that thought burning at the back of my mind.

As I was walking to and fro to finish the last few books, I got to a pretty close distance from her that a whisper escaped her lips.

"Uh, your name is Park Jiyeon, right?"

I in a large amount of oxygen. God, she finally spoke.

That soft voice, though..

"Yeah," I simply nodded as I tried to steady my breathing at the moment.

She gave me the most charming smile I've ever seen.

"Hi, I'm Ham Eunjung, do you know of any good books to recommend me? I really love fiction books, if that's necessary."

Each day ever since I started my job, I saw you with books clutched tightly in your hands, pressed close to your heart—and now, I wished I was fiction.

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greenjade21 #1
Chapter 1: I wish something happened after that conversation... Hehe... Felt wanting more! Haha... But, really, 't was a very good story. Short but, very good. Nice work authornim.
Sonozaki_
#2
Chapter 1: Its really cute I love it ! Omg, I just wanna know more of what'll happen to both of them KYAAA ! make more eunyeon fics ^^

This is DAE~BAK !
klee95 #3
Chapter 1: Continuing from the last one...

Right, so if it's still more natural for you to use that sort of diction, you could consider third-person close perspective. Still, I think first person works great for this fic, and you did quite well at it, so I'd encourage you to keep at it. I also recommend reading it aloud, lol, or vocalizing it in your head. It becomes really obvious when some parts sound like Jiyeon and some parts sound like a more disconnected narrator.

A few things with the tense again, but I think you definitely improved from the last fic. It was mostly the beginning, like "I'm glad..." I know it seems strange, but since you're writing in past tense, it should be "I was glad..." It doesn't mean that Jiyeon isn't glad anymore, just sets the story in the past. Oh, and the 's contractions are always in present tense, so if you're writing in past, you have to use was. For example, "It's" is "It is" and not "It was."

Time for nitpicky stuff. If Suzanne Collins is the author, the book would be placed in the author's section where the "C" is. It goes by last name! And "I could seriously feel her glare on me," unless you mean that Eunjung is actually GLARING (like staring angrily with eyebrows furrowed and frowning and everything), I would just say "I could seriously feel her staring at me." Replacing "glare" with "gaze" sounds a little unnatural, since do YOU ever say gaze? I thought it was weird that Jiyeon glared back, too, since she's like in love. So yup, stare.

Riiiight, that's about it for now. Thumbs-up :D I loved that last line by the way. And you call /me/ cheesy. Hope you don't feel put off by the concrit by the way, I'm just invested in your improvement ;u; It's a good sign really, if stuff is just BAD, I don't bother concrit-ing because I'll just say "rewrite it all." Feel free to ask me for editing too~!
klee95 #4
Chapter 1: This was really cute again :D You have a knack for this sort of thing. Like the aquarium one, I think the setting really helped to set a good atmosphere. Libraries are a nice place, haha.

(Okay, sorry if the rest of this sounds like a legit review; I'm pretty used to doing this sort of thing since I do editing for other people at my uni's writing center, so.)

First person was an interesting choice, but I liked it. I dunno, the more personal touch as compared to third person just makes more sense, since a large part of this is interiority/thoughts from Jiyeon rather than a recount of actions. It's kind of like getting rid of the middleman and letting Jiyeon herself tell us how she feels.

You did a good job with keeping Jiyeon's voice consistent; lines like "Since like...a few days ago" or "She must've noticed me checking her out - " really sounded authentic. Oh, and the interiority was really good too, Jiyeon's rambling thought patterns made her a really three-dimensional character. I'm also glad you didn't choose to go into overt descriptions of the environment, especially since we know what most libraries look like anyway. The thing about first person is it's really like the narrator (Jiyeon) is telling us a story, so she would choose to focus on what she finds most important. She doesn't seem like the type of person to be overly concerned with the library, so you placing a bigger focus on Eunjung is great and it keeps me in the story.

The only thing though, some of this sounds too much like WRITING. What I mean by that is, say "I'm glad I get to enjoy the peace and serenity..." or "with a look of amusement on their faces upon..." Consider that this is JIYEON TELLING us a story. Most the time, her diction is using "like" and "" and really teenager-ish language, so using words like "serenity" and "upon" just don't sound natural. That's sort of why first-person is difficult to pull off, because the natural voice is really, really important.
Vervainify #5
Chapter 1: This is so awww ;uuuuuuuuuu;
I'm actually confused what to say here because I have told majority of my thoughts to you on twitter XD
But again, this is such a good material to read and I'm not saying this just for good manner.

Idk how to say but the atmosphere in the library set is just so calm and warm and I like how Jiyeon is trying to pick up Eunjung's attention but she's shy and flustered and ends up like she's the one who's being picked by Ej XD

I'm gonna wait for moaaaar Eunyeon fic from ya :D
astrea88 #6
Chapter 1: its good, make another eunyeon's story too
smiley-seulgi
#7
Chapter 1: This was so cute! ^_^