An ajar door, a quick peek inside, and then a rapid blur of motion, before Jaehwan is promptly shoved within a tiny room and followed equally as swiftly by the other.
Foreword
First taekhwan // keo oneshot, comments are super appreciated!
Chapter 1: I really loved your characterization of Leo! I myself always imagine him as somewhat of a sadist, torturing poor Ken. It's so hard to find fics with this kind of Leo, so thank you for sharing. Your writing style was very interesting and the way you portrayed the scenes was great.
So this is the first time I'm doing this because this story is just too much for me >//<
"Hakyeon leaping about in a flurry of rings and clip-on earrings adorning every available finger and lobe"
N, YOU WOULD DO THAT WON'T YOU YA LITTLE DUMB DUMB
"the maknae disobeying all known laws of wrinkling his stage clothes in the rare hope of Hongbin letting him curl up in his lap"
I love love Hyukbin so I practically squealed when you added this bit in.
"a quick peek inside, and then a rapid blur of motion, before Jaehwan is promptly shoved within a tiny room and followed equally as swiftly by the other"
Woah, things are getting heated there. (｡´∀｀)ﾉ
"but the older figures the dim light creeping under the closed door is enough to make out each and every pore of the boy he can’t help but feel the need to mark as his own"
Awww, so Taekwoonie has a crush on Jaehwan? Me gusta mucho
"the blond instantly refuses the urge to compare the giant hovering over him to that of a puppy"
random cute in the middle of heated gooeyness (*≧▽≦)
"Jaehwan squeals at the suddenness"
Oh lord, every time I hear Jaehwan and squeal/giggle together, I get overwhelmed by the cute image.
"“Jaehwan, why can’t you ever like being with me?”"
Cheeky eh
"and watching Jaehwan watch Sanghyuk for his response in real life. Anybody that isn’t Taekwoon is indorsed to the all smiles blond, and the fact that he – to this day – has absolutely no clue why frustrates the older to the extent that he’s almost had to kidnap Jaehwan minutes before their recording to sheepishly get it out of his system."
Taekwoonie must really like him, esp. at the part where he's watching Jaehwan watch Sanghyuk. xD Jealous much?
"“Sort of, what?” Taekwoon asks, voice humming across Jaehwan’s cheek."
GAAAH, THE IMAGE >3<
"He eyes Taekwoon looking curiously at it and feels a toxic swash of red swipe at his cheeks, blushing furiously."
oh you cutie （=´∇｀=）another fluff-inducing sentence
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