Alternate ending

Dawn

Because kimnamjoon asked nicely

 

“Wait,” he runs out, almost tripping on the front rug. The guy raises an eyebrow at him, expectant. If Jimin squinted, he could see the messy hazy of the club and the flashing colors surrounding him. But now was morning. And mornings lit ups every scar and freckle and imperfection. Jimin could see the light bags under his eyes, yeah, he was more attractive in the bright light of day. “I don’t have classes on Wednesday, want to grab lunch?”

He blinks once, then twice. He answers uncertainly, “Yeah sure.”

“Great,” Jimin runs back to his kitchen, successfully tripping on the rug, and a grabs a pen. He hears the laughter but he isn’t embarassd. In slanted letters, he writes his phone number on the guy’s hand, “I’m Jimin, by the way.”

“I’m Yoongi.” There was a smile, not the full lazy cat grin but one more real than the smirk he had last night. With a final wave he left.

Jimin’s pulse didn’t slow down.

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SeoulEH86 #1
Chapter 1: This is amazing. Sososo amazing! I think you did a good choice with this ending, it is more sad, but also more realistic and I freaking love it.
I love how you wrote Yoongi and Jimin's personnalities and the way you described both settings, morning and night, is just perfect.
turntosay #2
i just found this, wow. and this is so good tbh. thumbs up!
LetYourBeautyUnfold #3
Chapter 2: i really loved the style of writing and also the raw realism of the first ending. thanks for writing this, it was a real pleasure to read as i am just starting to get into the fandom and this ship
BB_BiBi #4
Chapter 1: Woah...i love the ending so much...it way more real than other fic ending evetho im curious whut gonna happen next
blanc205 #5
Chapter 1: this is good, really... suga needs love that jimin is. and you are right, this kind of ending is more realistic. Glad that I find this somehow, thanks for the fic ^^
crinchan #6
Chapter 1: This ending is the best. I like the kiss and everything. Also I can somehow see them meeting again, randomly on the street or in the club or something. They will stare at each other and yeah, they meet but still will leave as strangers again.
... Ignore what I wrote here but this story is so ... I love it that it makes you think. Normally I read and then my attention slips to the next thung, here I can't help but think a lot how this might continue or not and yeah, you did a great job author nim.
byujun #7
Chapter 1: omggg. i wish yoongi came back to the apartment >< good job i rly love all your writings
DeadSWORDMASTER #8
Chapter 1: I will comment here because this one already has the ending that perfectly satisfies me :D I love how you told about Yoongi's uneasiness for being exposed in the daylight and it felt so real and just right for Jimin to let Yoongi stay and leave as stranger. Your writing style sure is something and so is your work! :D
Arashika #9
Chapter 2: I agree... I prefer the first one. The alternate ending is kinder, better for the Yoonmin but definitely not as realistic.
Although a part of me can't help but hope they meet again... but from the way Yoongi reacts, he might not go back to that club again for a while just to avoid Jimin QAQ
Again I love this >_< You have a beautiful way with words.
Great job, keep writing~
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