Chapter 1: ok...very off with just character names being used and not irl stuff...myungsoo is a superficial ! hahaha the meaning behind was good.

Chapter 1: aww, this is cute. i love the snowflake reference a lot.
good job~ =]

Chapter 1: wow it was really good,but unnie I think you use the word 'as' too much and well I just say it from my p.o.v but it's sometimes a bit uncomfortable reading the same words lots of times :/ ....however it's just a suggestion,don't take it as a complain :) thank you for your stories anyway ♥

Chapter 1: Woo ~ i loved it when he explained the necklace XD

Chapter 1: Awwwwww. How i wish someone say that?

Chapter 1: omg this is cute i don't know how i found it but i love it