abstraction deficiency

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smolder
#1
Chapter 1: so i just finished rereading this for some reason at 3:13 in the morning, and i immediately hate my fifteen-year-old self for not being able to fully appreciate the beauty of this piece ?? reading it word by word was so, so rewarding to me as a reader - especially piecing the story together one by one with the different colors representing different realities & wavelengths of life, i guess, blending into one. reading it slowly and taking my time with it helped me notice along the way all the parallels and repetition etc. and the way the story wrapped up, the way everything in a sense fell into place was so beautifully done, and i'm not sure if it's because it's now 3:15am or because i'm still angry at past me or because this piece is simply so, so mindblowing and beautiful in one, but i'm visibly shaking right now and i love you so much and i admire your amazing talents. omg ok i'm gonna pass out but wow this is something im going to be returning to forever
LolliLovee
#2
Chapter 1: when you get halfway through the story and remembered that it was inspired by 1q84 and you're just like, oh. now it all makes sense.

and then you stare at the headers again and are like, oh. should have seen this coming.

And then you still somehow get shocked by the ending.

JFC. I SAW IT COMING BUT I DIDNT AND WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW.
smolder
#3
Chapter 1: GOD I JUST REREAD THIS AND I UNDERSTAND IT BETTER OK IT WAS SOOOO WORTH REREADING <333
I LOVE IT SO MUCH I THINK I JUST WANT TO PRINT OUT SHEETS AND SHEETS OF IT AND DECORATE MY ROOM WITH YOUR WORDS
YOU ARE AMAZING
HOW DID YOU EVEN THINK OF THIS
THIS STORY IS AMAZING
IT'S MINDBLOWING

OMG I CAN'T EVEN
THE FEEEEEEEEEEELS
aoikou
#4
Chapter 1: YOU ARE AMAZING. AS ALWAYS.
smolder
#5
i'm glad that YOU were born into this world ok
you're my inspiration and senpai ;_____;
i love you as much as you love me + a little more <333
smolder
#6
Chapter 1: wAIT OMG I AM SO HONORED CAN U NOT

and i just read this whole thing in like two sittings in one day and i love love it but then i had this wtf moment at the end wAIT HOLD UP SO WHATTTT
HOW IS THERE NO BUILDING

and okay so jaeseop was the guy in the beginning who threw the waste into the river? or was it someone else and
so i get jaeseop and jiyeon's relationship but whattt

btw your writing can you not i plan on framing this on my wall along with my golf scoreboard :D
THANK YOU SAPPHY
YOU ARE AMAZING
AND SO TALENTED
AND BEAUTIFUL oK YOU DO NOT KNOW HOW HONORED I AM
swabluu
#7
Chapter 1: omg super long fic for once!! and i am now dying of happiness because hdu perfect omg
devilgirlmaria
#8
Chapter 1: I heard about upstream color awhile ago and thought about watching it maybe soon I will watch it :) <3 lovely work as always