Scribble

Description

Scribble - A story adapted from the drama "Good Doctor" and "MBLAQ The Dramatic" that potrayed an Angel who got punished by God because of a severe mistake that he had done and was sent to the earth. In order to re-unite him back with God, he need to find and experience what true love is no matter is from family bond, friendship or true relationship either man-man or man-woman but because of his severe punishment, he was not born into this world as a normal child, but a child who is disable. A child who has autism. A child who has difficulties in talking and expressing his feelings. So how the story unfold? Stay tune.

This will be my 4th fanfic that I have plan to write it down but because I have 2 fanfics onhold, please bear with this. I hope this fanfic will turn out well like my previous "If You Come Into My Heart". If you haven't read it, please have a look.

Foreword

"You punk! You bastard! Get out from my house! You are not welcome here!" my father said. He was furious as his anger got over him. He chase me out from the house, throwing everything at me, and even worse, try to whip me with his belt. 

I was scared. As a little child I am, my left hand continues to shake furiously while staring at him with a blank look.

"Honey! Please stop it!" My mom try to defend me as she block his furious torture with her body while hugging me.

"You piece of trash! What are you doing trying to defend him? You ! Giving birth to such an useless child!" My father starts to whip her with the belt he got hold from his pants.

Each whip hurts my mom alot as she only can protect me while crying over for everything that my father had did. 

"You huh! Earn such little money and yet try to give birth to a trash child. You are a disgrace to the family. Aishhhh! The more I look at you, the more I got angry!"

"You !" Again my father whip her but my mom can only plead him to stop. 

Until the neighbours heard the ruckus and step out to defend for us. They took hold my father and try to calm him down while the rest gently hold us up and lead us to their home.

"Let go of me! Yah you ! Don't come back into the house you piece of trash!" His anger rising to the max as he got hold of a beer bottle on the floor and throw at us. Right at my mom's head.

I saw my mom, fall over to the floor. head's bleeding lots of blood.

I can only stare at her...

"MRS PARK!!!!"

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Kyung1Ari #1
Chapter 2: Oh poor Doongie.
butteringabun99
#2
Chapter 2: Sleeping On a job? Cheondoong you ... Really ... Sorry Oppa, I don't why but I found that part is kinda funny x_x /facepalming/
But the punishment ... It must be hard for him TT hope he will meet his happiness soon aka meet seungho soon :3
random-user1234 #3
Chapter 2: ahahaha!!! A guy in Africa XDDD this is hilarious but really sad TT^TT at least The Lord is merciful enough to give him a punishment like this, could be much much worse... Ehehe but he will meet seungho right? ^^ I'm happy for that :)
bellekyuwookielove
#4
Chapter 2: Somehow it amuses me on how Doongie slacks on his work hahaha :))

I will also anticipate this story :3 doongie will be born as a human <3
nizdoongie
#5
Chapter 2: waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...... you update 2 story.. kekekekekek
Iam proud you authornim... you daebak.. ahahahaha
Iam curious what the next happen.. hohoho
Kyung1Ari #6
Chapter 1: Oh no! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
random-user1234 #7
Chapter 1: nooooo what have you done, sanghyunnie????? TT^TT wahhhh asjkdhakjshdakjdh im so curious... but yayyy you updated!!!
butteringabun99
#8
Chapter 1: Woaaaaaaa !!!!! No word but curiosity . What thing that he had done ? TT it must be so hard for sunggu to did that TT
Ughhhh Oppa !!! It seems so great TT hope you will update soon :3
random-user1234 #9
ehehehe i notice you like writing about angels, well since your name is SDAngel anyway... i don't mind, i love angel stories XDDD in fact i wrote a seungdoong angel story once, but i prefer yours heaps better
random-user1234 #10
I HAVE FALLEN IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY... HEAD OVER HEELS IN LOVE..... AND ITS ONLY THE FOREWORD... TT^TT my precious sanghyunnie has autism???? TT^TT wahh..... my heart is broken seeing his mother like that.... what an jerk//bastard/****head of a father.... TT^TT why he treat them like this... please continue... i really really love this.