Fresh Tears and Alcohol Kisses

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Happy?
 
The word was foreign to him. His mind was blank and there were no words for him to use and no ground to stand on.
 
A single pristine tear. Her eyes were wild with hurt and hate, screaming for him to leave. For some reason, Jiyong felt he needed to wipe that tear from her face, despite the fact it might just send him to his grave early.

That darned tear, he just couldn't stand seeing it there.

 

 

 

Foreword

 

This is a snippet out of a long chaptered fic I've been brainstorming for the best part of three months. I was itching to get started and so came out with this, on which I took (no lie) four days to write. T_T

Luckily, this chapter is very important to the plot but doesn't give anything away. So it's a little teaser, if you like. ^^

Please comment about any questions or thoughts you have, and PLEASE give me feedback on part four. It's my first time writing such a scene, and I'm not sure if I've done it justice. (You'll hopefully know what I'm talking about when you get there. :3)

There is likely to be more stray chapters posted as one shots in the future, so keep an eye out if you like it.

Subscribe - the full one shot will be out in five installments. You wouldn't want to miss it, would you? ;)

 

Enjoy~  ^^

 

 

 

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footlesself99 #1
Chapter 5: I loved this. I really want to know their back story and their future. I mean, what happens to the new boyfriend now? What happened between them that made them break apart when they still obviously love each other? I want to know!!!
-jeiraz #2
Chapter 5: Wait, okay- so are they even back together or what
What about scout's new boyfriend
Omf I need a sequel ;;;;;;;
JiYong_JaGi #3
Chapter 5: so they ended up back together? that's great~ ^^
Sema07 #4
Chapter 4: Perfect chapter !keep on this way. Don't neglect the dialogue between the characters and it will be more than perfect i am looking forward the next chapter
abisrsly #5
I love love love your writing style, and the storyline and the mystery. You've clearly put a lot of thought into your chapters and it shows, this is exactly what I've been looking for in an angst story so please keep it up!
-jeiraz #6
Chapter 2: sigh. i'm really pitying jiyong here, considering i feel the way he does.
god, i really love the way you write c:
differentdream #7
Chapter 1: nice :) i like it
JiYong_JaGi #8
is this a one shot or chapters story? seems interesting~ i hope it's not sad ending though~ hehe~ waiting for your update~ ^^
-jeiraz #9
Chapter 1: You're really talented. :)
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