Pick-up lines

Description

The new kid falls for Luhan and how does he plan on winning his heart? Pick up lines.

Foreword

This is a story written for my bestfriend, whose account is Chiihan on here.It was for her birthday that was actually in july.It's been 89 days since I promised it .I know it's crappy and maybe the story line isin't very clear but I tried .I'm sorry ,soo sorry.I'm not an exo fan so, bear with me guys if you don't like it .

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Psronnie #1
Chapter 1: Oh...that was so sweet it's cavity inducing! Just what I needed! Thanks! Pls write more!
clang2 #2
Chapter 1: Omo >.< kyaaaa ~ this is so cute ! Too adorable kailu fluff fluff~
eine08 #3
Chapter 1: cuuuuute!! >_<
purplebluepink #4
Chapter 1: The ending awwwww!!! "a mothering pick up line" hahahhahahahahaha i like that
oh-tea-twelve #5
Chapter 1: awwwwh~ this was so cuteee and snuggly
luhan being in denial while infact his heart has long accepted jongin heehee, good thing chanyeol is a wise friend of his or else he'd probably lose jongin to soo
thank you for this, it was lovely~
<3
fluffyns #6
Chapter 1: MUGYAAAAA <33
Chiihan #7
Chapter 1: Wahhh ommmmg >u<
This is so freakin' cute and Jongin's pickup lines ahaha. This story made me smile and laugh. I love Luhan and Kai's characterization here c: And I somehow knew that Chanyeol would be in this too.
I can't believe you used Kyungsoo as the er -.- (I thought it was Taemin at first hehe) Oh and I love the ending. It ends with a kiss ahhh >///< (and I love the pickup line you used for the ending)
Anyways, this story gave me lots of Kailu feels and thank you for making this cute story. Even though this is a belated birthday gift, I still love it <3 Thank you Mandeg, saranghae ~
P.S: Sorry for the long comment ^^ll
jonginese #8
Seems interesting uwu
oh-tea-twelve #9
lukai gets to me ugh they're my weakness c::
update soon~
JIAYOU! ::D
<3
Chiihan #10
Wahhh, the plot seems interesting. I already love it >u< (Well of course its Kailu lol) Don't make me wait for too long ! I'll be waiting c:
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