Pocky love

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A very fluffy Elvin fic. Eli was hungry and Kevin had nothing else but pockys with him. This happens after their EYK interview. (Well actually in the evening, but at the same day anyway)

Did I mention that it will be really fluffy? Yeah I think so.

I'm not good with descriptions, sorry! XD

I will post the story later this day, because I wrote it kinda quickly and there is a lot of mistakes that I need to fix ^^

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ExtremeACRepairman #1
Chapter 1: yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay, i love this
ellyemilyn #2
Chapter 1: you want some criticism right?
here they are:

MAKE IT LONGER OMAIGOSH THIS IS SO SWEET IT NEEDS TO BE LONGER THAN THIS!
and then i see typos and i'm not good with grammar too so i'll just leave it
and lastly, consider to write a full scene. dont be lazy next time haha :p

overall, i like it. :3
write more okay? thank you for writing this ^^
ellyemilyn #3
update soon :D
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