See you later my love

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I'm so sorry for everything

Foreword

Jonghun leaned on pile of pillows, while Hongki laid his back against Jonghun's chest. Jonghun wrapped his arms around Hongki's waist and realized that he getting skinnier. They watch the video silently. It’s currently showing the park that they frequently visit. Everything was covered by a thick white blanket, the grass, benches and trees.

“It’s so beautiful” Hongki sounded amazed. “But that place is much more beautiful” He chuckled weakly. “That’s the most awesome place that I ever seen. The river is so clear that the surface could reflect the trees which left to grow freely on the outskirts, the sky so bright and blue and the flowers dancing merrily in the breeze” Hongki explained.

 “I’m planning to go there later” Hongki said in low voice. “Where is it?” Jonghun asked carefully. He felt hongki's shoulders moving on his chest. “I don’t know” He answered. “Can I come along?” Hongki was silent for a moment before he shook his head lightly. “No, you can’t. Not yet.”

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Shiramik #1
Chapter 1: this is totally heartbreaking...
i'm crying like mad now..
it's pity that they cannot be together :'(
Village-Idiot #2
This is so precious TTuTT
This one goes straight to my favorites, it may be one of the most beautiful and touching fics I've ever read or will get to read, no kidding.
Simply perfect, I literally cried <3
I could compliment you in a hundred different ways but I just hope you keep on writing!
hongstary #3
Chapter 1: Why is it soo sad :"( its makes me cry but I like it
Keep writing I like this beautiful story
hongstary #4
Chapter 1: Why is it soo sad :"( its makes me cry but I like it
Keep writing I like this beautiful story
HoneyJune #5
Chapter 1: Ommo, don't really know what to say.
it really touching me. Where must i started? too much i wanna say.
first, i love it when you describe Jonghun knew Hongki very well that there's no need to exchange word
second, i like how you care about the detail, you don't only mention about the illness, but you also show us the symptoms. I've been notice this since your first story that you are very thorough. It's very good, and will be very very good to still that care when you make a chapters story.
I too, notice the difference style that you use. This story has some poetic in it and it really beautiful to read. I love it when you use a term like a nectar flower, mystery smell of river, etc. It's simple and general, so most likely all the readers will understand, yet it's strong and beautifully arranged that it left deep impression and make me think "Oh, so it feels like that" when i read the sentence.
The way you end it was my most favorite, you could describe Jonghun's undying love very well that he's willing to free Hongki from his sickness, and also the last sentence just make it perfects.
I think i'm writing too much now, but I can't help it, this story will definitely imprinted in my long-term memory. Thank you for write such a good story. ^^
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