Story of the Day I Died

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Living your life in heaven in everything a mortal could ever ask for...it's paradise. But unable to recover your memory of how it came to be is not the way things should be in the perfect world of angels. How come this man can not remember? Was it something wrong that he did? But if he had done something wrong to that extreme, why would he be gifted with the everlasting fate of paradise? Join the tale of a forbidden love that will only bloom through...the unknown.

Foreword

Prologue

"Your friend's penalty is hell. Nothing can be undone other than the sacrifice of the other."

The man shuddered by the enemy of the Creator's booming voice. "W-what do you mean?" the cat like man asks. He is nervous, but confident. He knows what is right.

Lucifer laughed. Though he was unseen, Kibum could hear the devious smile playing his lips. "Sacrifice yourself. Your friend will forever live in peace and happiness.
"Choose, dear fellow. Your friend...or you. To rot in hell with me forever."

A  furious tremble vibrated through the deserted middle of no where. Kibum hung his head low as he caressed his lover's angelic features. The answer was clear as day to Kibum, yet difficult to comprehend. But he would do anything to prevent his lover's terrible fate.

"I love you, Taemin."

The devil nodded in satisfaction. "Very well, Kibum. My...slaves, will you to the first stage of hell. Limbo. Except, you won't be given the chance to receive the light, but darkness for your first eternity. Know that I am being lenient on you, Kibum, because I know you could be of my use. Any who, the stages will continue on. Be aware of your choice."

Kibum just nodded and released the man he loved for five years from his extremely tight protective hold. I love you Taemin.

And that was it.

Taemin's limp soul rose from the light as Kibum was yet to discover his fate, dragged into the eternal darkness. He did not regret it.

 

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For me, this story is no joke. I am very serious about this one. It pains me to write this, but I found it very interesting so you know the consequences of going against God. I am a proud Cathoilc Asian and hope to inspire you in your way of life. In reality, I am terrified. I look up research of the 13 stages of hell and I fear it greatly and respect God's law because I know it is right, and I want to do it. I want each of you to learn the wrath afterlife may bring you if you make too many of the wrong decisions and don't trust in God to forgive them. I suggest you be familiar with the Bible and stages of hell before reading this. It is highly angsty, but I hope each and everyone of you who read this enjoy it and learn something new from it.

~1wkeylove

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Charavivre
#1
so interestinggg!
Chanyeolized #2
this story is like ...wow
Charavivre
#3
Please, updaaaaaate ;;_;;
joleen8899 #4
Update soon please, it's so good and sad!!!
Charavivre
#5
Please, update this story as soon as possible.!! It was like.. love at first chapter.? :DD I love your stories, you're such a great writer!!! <333
ILIKEPRETTYBOYS
#6
I feel so sad for Kibum D:<br />
Omg the hounds...*shudders*<br />
And 300 years...that's a long time xD<br />
I guess time flies by really quickly in Heaven and Hell ><<br />
Please update soon! :))
Raven_Night27
#7
Love your Story! Please update soon! Fighting!
RavenRage #8
I call myself an atheist, but I´m always open to any possibilities...<br />
I´m definitely going to read this, I just...yeah...