Strangers in a Park

Description

To the world they had been nothing, but he was her world.

 
Pairing: Luna/Onew (fxband/SHINee)
Challenge Prompt: Moonlight
Song: "Travelin' Soldier" by the Dixie Chicks
Warnings: Character Death
 

Foreword

So I started this a while ago, on one of my summer mini-vacations... and I guess this is it finished. Please tell me how it is. It's sort of just thrown together and it time-jumps.

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uglylovely #1
Chapter 1: ohh! how i wish i can describe my emotions right now! I'm happy,sad.. -_-
nice brainstorming authornim!!!
crazy4life2day
#2
Chapter 1: Wow, that was perfect. I liked the blend of her current thought with flashbacks. It's sad that she has nothing to remember him by but that place in the park.
ParkMiyoung
#3
Chapter 1: this was very nice and beautiful. It was a bit sad, but then it wasn't because it was somehow sweet too..you did a great job with this! <3

Though I am wondering what's up with all the angst people are writing nowadays...seriously every otp's I'm searching for (or in this case one idol, luna) has the first 5 or more stories with the 'angst' tag...
crazy4life2day
#4
Oh, sounds interesting. Look at you, so much angst lately. I can't wait to read it.