Dark Ties

by Nictaeny9

[Titles] 5/5 :

For me, your title is great and related to the story. Besides, the title was mysterious yet dark and it can make reader can't wait to read it.

[Foreword] 9/10 :

I like your foreword and the way you describe the character but it could be nice if you make it a bit short but seriously it doesn't effect anything.

[Plot] 18/20 :

Your plot is not really original but the way you write it make it seems original. But, at first i read your story, it is a bit confusing but then i could understand it hehehe ^^ Anw, your plot is great.

[Poster & bg] 4/5 :

Your poster is beautiful, dark, and creepy that's the way i like it but maybe you need a background to make it more dark.

[Flow] 20/20 :

Iam a bit lazy this week but little did i read, your story is great and it will make the reader curious about what will happen next and that was awesome!!! Keep up ^^

[Ending] 10/10 :

The story doesn't ending yet.

[Grammar and spelling] 20/20 :

Your grammar isn't bad, I can understand every word you write.

[Overall enjoyment] 10/10 :

What can i say??? Your story is awesome, intresting yet intertaining

Total : 96/100

Review by 4everloner