Chapter 8: Okay, so the end of the last chapter, hilarious! I pulled that similar kinda thing on my friend and he actually believed me and was so scared! XD Anyways, please update. I would love to know what happens next!!!
Chapter 5: Awesome~ I kove the story~ But you should add some more drama once they start thaining~ It's tough in the entertainment industry.. idols are not as carefree as they make themselves out to be. You can portrait how Henry and Kari go through those tough times together and use the girl's social awkwardness as a humor basis~ Once she debuts in her group called D.I.A., it would be quite funny if she got asigned as the member in charge of appeal :D And then Henry would have to teaxh her the basic knowlege of beins y! Haha~ I'm sorry, your story, I got a little carried away! :D I just wrote a couple of stories about EXO with the same plot although I didn't publish them on AFF :D Fighting~
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