Chapter 5: Someone has to start talking about the elephant in the room..and she won't do it, because of she does then that means she will lose him, but what she doesn't get is that she has already lost him, because she doesn't acknowledge the problem verbally and the more she keeps quiet the worse it will be..I've been down this road before and the sad cycle only ended when I finally confronted him. The sad thing about it is that he told me that he was no good for me and I deserved better..he said that he did love me but he couldn't be with just one person..so in the end it was over and I felt like great weight was lifted off of me..it taught me a great lesson about love and knowing what I want in a realationship and never settle for anything less because I deserve better...please update soon!!
Chapter 5: This is like depression on a screen if you know what I mean...maybe no. Just puts you in this sad, angry, confused mess. That means you are writing one heck of a story.
Chapter 5: Wow...everything is so sad between her and myungsoo.
Despite the confessions and moments to prove their happiness, it all becomes temporary the moment bad times out-weighed their good ones. Their relationship is deemed "damaged" without a chance of success. Their love for each other seems too fragile to renew their flaws. The sad part is their denial an unwillingness to take this cue. He's unfaithful and she's not as strong as she advised yixing to be. She, as well, made her pain easily invisible and myungsoo doesn't seem to understand. They need a benediction really.
Chapter 4: So, at least Myungsoo understands that he's in the wrong. There are so many questions that I want answered and there have only been 4 chapters. Why is Myungsoo being like that towards Stephanie if he knows he's being a jack***?
I don't know how I feel about Stephanie. Her submissiveness really irritates me. But I know that her personality wont let her confront Myungsoo about it, right? Since she's shy. Lay seems like he cares for Steph a lot but I wish that he would "man up" a little. He only concerns himself with how Stephanie is feeling but he doesn't do anything.
*sigh* It's only the beginning though, I know. There is a long way to go. I'm just so excited. You write really well and I like that it's clear and I know exactly what's going on at all times.
Chapter 1: Ughh my gahd a new story!! :D yay. It's only normal to get frustrated at stephanie for not seeing what's right in front of her but in real life it happens so much. We just get so wrapped up in what we have that we don't see anyone else; it's like we don't know what's better. I'm sure the realization will be like running right into a wall.
Oo, yet again!! xD I'll try to wait patiently for an update :3. The part where Stephanie smiles at Lay and tells him he's too kind, I immediately thought of Verbal Jint's "you deserve better" mv, where the girl's pet dog is portrayed as a human to how how much he's there for her while she's in an abusive relationship. Again, in the video she was oblivious until things got ugly.
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