Tired of Falling

Description

Jinri falls and breaks easily, but Sulli, Sulli is stronger than that.

At least...

...she hopes she is.

 

 

...a never ending cycle of falling and breaking and putting the pieces back together as best I can...

 

 

Foreword

Warnings:  Yuri(girl/girl), suicidal thoughts, character death, suicide, mentions of .

Pairings: Sulli-centric; Sulber, Sesul, Kailli, Taelli, mentioned!Sestal. 

Type: One-shot.

Status: Complete.

 

This is my contest entry for ♦ EXORDIUM WRITING CONTEST ♦ and I'm using the prompt: "You can't make the same mistake twice. The second time you make it, it's no longer a mistake -- it's a choice."
 
This was also inspired a lot by wishful's story "destroyed in love" and I don't really notice any similarities between the two, but if you happen to, that's probably why. And if you've never read it before, you really should because holy crap she's an amazing writer and that story is so beautifully written. 
 
 

credits to K-POPmacaroonBakery at Mental Breakdown Review Shop for the review that can be found here. 

Author's Thoughts
PictureMeBroken
9/17: This style is so different from my usual style and it's making me really question my work on it
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ilovesleep #1
Chapter 1: Thanks for writing. I enjoyed it very much. :)
hanaplor #2
Chapter 1: First time ever reading a yuri fic!
OH MY GOSH THIS IS JUST...AMAZING.
I feel sad after reading it but my awe for your talent in writing weighs greater.
Good job author-nim and congratulations for winning the contest ^^
CookieBear16 #3
Chapter 1: This was incredibly written!
To be honest, I've NEVER read anything that wasn't Super Junior related, but this suddenly caught my eye, and I felt like I needed to read it. I'm super glad I did, because it was fantastic, and I can understand why it won first place in the contest you participated in. Sulli broke down her whole story in more or less simple words that held so much impact that it made you think what was behind the minds of each one of the characters. I loved how the story was never once truly happy, and that the tone stayed the same throughout the entire thing. And my favorite was the ending, of course, how Sulli jumped, ending her life, and you described the way those people who wronged her mourned her death, and especially how Krystal's mysteriously involved character was finally revealed at the very end.
Thanks for this amazing one-shot. Sorry if the comment was a lil' too long. :P
xfourwalls #4
Chapter 2: this is one of the many beautiful Sulli stories I've read here on AFF. I really cried at the end and everything about it screams teenage spirit, it's very odd how a story can move a human's heart. I think if Sulli ever find out about all the stories about her, even if they're tragic and sad. she would stil be very happy. I as a Sulli stan (a hard core one) applause you for your amazing work. we'll done. :)
jaecomponents #5
Chapter 2: You're welcoooooome! ^^
seiranti #6
Chapter 1: oooh..this is sooo sad.. i cried when i read it, poor..poor jinri, she just want to be loved.. hiks
ArianaMaddi #7
Update soon, neh? =}
cocorini #8
This seems nice, I'll be waiting for you to update it ^^
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