Paradox

Description

Broken glass and short goodbyes.

Foreword

I often start things, leave them alone for a month or two, then start them up again and this was one of those ideas. It's written quite differently from other things I've published on here but I'd say this is closer to the way I like writing best.

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btsbabe #1
Chapter 1: This is so good I'm dying
nol_sarang
#2
Chapter 1: Simply amazing! You write beautifully. I could really feel the emotion between the two. You inspire me! I hope I can get to this skill of writing some day :).
cha_neve
#3
Chapter 1: Ohhh my Goodness, THIS is my most favorite writing style. I've been practicing to write like this for a good two years, and it just flows the best. This was BEAUTIFUL!!! I loved the dialogue, and you set the mood perfectly!! I love that nothing really had to be explained to portray what was going on. So serious and so powerful. I personally knew someone mildly like how you wrote Donghae in here and that hit me pretty hard. I was like "woah--o.o she went there" "He just wants to cut her off, to stop the doubt. . ." Omg, you don't even know how much I loved this!! I could go on, but I'll spare you my gushing. <333 just, ho-my. ;__;