Trapped, Controlled, Isolated: The Tale Of Becoming A Music Box

Description

This story is about Onew being a creepy, possessive boyfriend. He may look sweet and charming on the outside, but looks can fool you. You can say this is more of a misconception of him.  

Foreword

If you haven't guessed it already, this fanfiction is inspired by SHINee's "Orgel (오르골/ Music Box)". It's a very creative song that was written by SHINee's own Kim Jonghyun and Choi Minho. If you still haven't heard it yet, I highly recommend that you go check it out. Also, there is a music box version of "Orgel", so click here is you want to take a listen. 

A while ago, I had actually wrote a comment on Kpopfannzone's Orgel lyrics video on YouTube. The comment received quite an amount of likes and few people wanted to see a fanfic, so this is another reason why I decided to create this. 

 

The comment says:

"While I was reading the lyrics and listening to this, I imagined a very creepy version of Onew smiling as he the tears from the cheek of his girlfriend. He then kissed her on the cheek before walking out of the room, closing and locking the door behind him. The girl is now trapped in the lone, dark room with nothing but the quite music box playing in the background. Sorry. I know. I'm weird."

-- Tabi Strong Heart

 

I had actually wanted to write the fanfic immediately right after I read the lyrics to Orgel, but in the end it took me forever because I had trouble plotting and organizing everything out. I'm not the best writer in the world and I often have trouble getting my words out, so please understand that if I'm taking forever to update or something, please know that I haven't given up on the story but rather have trouble getting it done (note for the future).

Yes, this is officially my first fanfiction. I've read many fanfictions before, but I'm a complete newbie to this writing thing. 

 

***NOTE: All sentences that are written in italicize font are flashbacks (Onew's memories). Everything else written in normal font symbolizes present tense.  

 

♥ ♥ ♥ I hope you will enjoy my fanfiction and thank you for reading. ♥ ♥ ♥

 

 

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Chicken_xoxo #1
Please update! I'm sure this will be a great story :))))
VivaLaShawol
#2
please update!!!!
DevilC18
#3
I saw your comment on youtube a while ago and thought it was a story i'd love to read. And today when i was once again listening to this hypnotising (or just creepy) song a miracle happened and led me here! (in other words: i saw another comment of yours saying that you're really gonna write it)

I'm waiting for it :D update soon <3
shawnie21 #4
Ok, I need this story in my life. Plz update soon!
newtokpop09 #5
I <3 the idea, i'll be waiting!!!
ShineeBlack #6
This seems nice, I'll be waiting for you to update it ^^