❧ The Challengers
d r a g o n r i d e r s ❧ l o s t s o u l s (d i s c o n t i n u e d)Statuses: Rejected || Pending... || Accepted || Chosen
Choi Sooyeon (Umma/Soul) + Gong Chanshik (B1A4)Moon Jinjung (OC) + Wang Feifei (Miss A)
KoreanGal5 || Park Jihyun || Chosen
author: The author's application. Not entirely filled out and quite boring over all. I don't think she should be chosen but I suppose she'll have to do. And two OCs? This'll be...entertaining to write about. Well, this plotline is taken so I suppose there's not much to do. Well, this area will be where I review your applications. Oh, and just to warn the applicants, I'm probably the meanest reviewer of all time. (Onion is too nice and Fishy's in between.)
Park Eunyoung (Onion) + Zhang Yixing (EXO)
Park Eunyeon (Fishy) + Lee Changsun (MBLAQ)
duixing + LoveDonghae || Park Shinyeong || Chosen
author: Double the work for the twins, eh? Well, nice job in doing so. Choose your dragon's love interests soon. (And no, they can't be boys.)
[Note: Their example application has flaws and is not 100% completed. Do not reference until completed.]
Bang Yongguk (B.A.P) + Song Jieun (Secret)
BanaWarrior || Kim Bobae || Accepted [ ] [ ] [ ]
author: My fifth applicant! Over two years since I first started! I could cry. So to start with, thank you so much. I'll just be reading down and telling you what does not fit with the storyline or anything you might want to change because that means everything else works. First, if you have a crush on the son of King Orik, I must warn you that you are also one of his descendants so you will be crushing on your like seventh cousin or something to that effect. At this point in time, we are not assuming that any of the Inheritance characters are alive since it has been that long and the Witch is not your childhood friend alongside Yongguk or anyone since everyone begins in different towns. (You befriend her later although the relationship may not be exactly as you picture.) Your father's name is chosen (first and last). Your dragon shall be one color (White I'm assuming). Warning that Jieun will not be a wild dragon. Daniel will not be a wereanimal; he will be a dwarf (if you wish to change to fit your tastes.) You are tall for a dwarf so I will be shrinking you. I'm assuming around 120 cm is maximum for dwarves but I didn't tell you so my fault. I believe I covered everything. Thank you for applying and sorry for being mean about it. Oh, and her odd eye color was a nice touch. At first I paused and debated but then they never did mention dwarf eye colors too much so I'll accept it.
Lin Jiao Ling (Lin) + Wu Yifan (EXO)Liu Josephine (f(x)) + Sorceress's dragon
exo_lover666 || Lee Dasom || Rejected [x] [ ] [ ]
author: Hey Lin thanks for being my second applicant! I'll get straight into the review if you don't mind. So I'd like your personality to be longer. They aren't quite "paragraphs." Also, rather than simply stating how she is with each trait, explain her more; make her come alive. Also, the language trivia is completely unnecessary as there is no reason for you to speak four languages (no matter how cool) so I shall be ignoring that. Shades also aren't common and therefore, Bora will not be a
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