Glittering Jewel as Blue as the East Sea

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A little short story/one-shot I wrote in my Creative Writing class. It may seem a little confusing at times, and if it is, I apologize! I didn't really plan on putting it up, but I figured I had nothing to lose. So it isn't rated M, and there isn't any or stuff like that... It's pretty innocent, but it fit the whole plot better in my mind. PLEASE COMMENT SO I CAN HAVE FEEDBACK ON HOW OTHERS (YOU THE READERS) FEEL ABOUT MY WORK. Enjoy reading!

Foreword

When you think of the greatest love stories of all time, you think of Romeo and Juliet’s tragic love and death, or Jack and Rose’s ‘different world love’, even Grandma and Grandpa’s 50th anniversary, but there are great love stories that aren’t well known, but just as heart-warming. The story you’re about to read is just one of these stories that shows the loyalty that can last years. 

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onews-chicken-line #1
Chapter 1: I think you did a very good job with this story! The plot was both heartwarming and heartrending >o< As you write more stories, I would like to see maybe a bit more detail in your characterization regarding each person's personality instead of just their actions. However, your grammer was really good, and I've seen a lot of good authors struggle with that, so props to you ^^ I hope you write more stories. I would look forward to reading them if you did~
ForeverAndAlwaysSuJu #2
Chapter 1: *cries* *cries again* *doesn't stop crying* this was beautiful and perfect and beautiful. Thank you and good job!! GOOD JOB MAKING ME CRY!!!
beshhae #3
Chapter 1: Woah that was beautiful T_T
Its sad but pretty
Thanks unnie
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