School Life

Description

School life

 

Hey! this is my first fanfic so it may a bit you know...  Just so you this story is not k pop related. However my future stories hopefully will be! The story is just made up with normal english characters...

My story is about a girl with a normal school life filled with HOMEWORK, TEACHERS AND LESSONS  did i mention HOMEWORK?!                                            

 

Since this is my first fanfics please give me lots of feedback and tips on how to work on it!

Many thanks! Hwaiting! <3

Foreword

These are just made up normal charaters....

 

The main girl: Clare

She has auburn long hair, ivory skin, light emereld eyes.

she is:

-kind                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             -hardworking     

-humble                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    

dad

he is tall and dark

-funny

-loud

-goofy

mum(known as Jane in the story)-

-kind

-pretty

-bossy

 

She has aurburn long wavy hair, light emerld eyes and pale skin

Aunt Jasmine

she has short yellow blonde hair, aqua blue eyes, tanned skin.

- very nosy

- chatter box loves gossip

The twins (ellie and cellie)

they have short braided  blond hair, blue eyes, plae skin and lots of freckles.

-hyper 24/7

-annoying

-stubborn

with additional characters...

 

OrginalGirl
!! hwaiting

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Sandbreeze2061
#1
Chapter 3: The fanfic is really good so far and I see something bright in the future. I am even new in here and I am trying to read as much stories to get better. You have a good start.

Some critiques is maybe practicing making the chapters longer. :)
OrGiNaLiTy #2
Chapter 1: This fanfic is really cool I'm loving it!!
it relates to real life events!!
hwaiting! :) <3
OrginalGirl #3
Chapter 1: please can I have any tips to work on or any feedback this would be much appreciated!!! <3
OrginalGirl #4
please enjoy!