U're My Everything !!!

Description

sorry that i was confuse write hyuna instead jiyeon but now im already edite but i hope u will understand if some i still not edit yet and the chapter that im confuse is 4 and 5

Foreword

emmmm ..... This is my first story that I write if this story make all of u bored plz forgive me I will try my best more and one more thing is .... my English skills is bad especially my gramer is soooooo bad . I hope all of will understand ... ^^

 

Author's Thoughts
Coolzzzz
is my story make u bored ? why noone comment on my story ,. .... so sad
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Coolzzzz #1
sorry now I'm trying on the next episode and thz for my reader.... ^^ even not alot but I feel good .
Betsy_Diego #2
Chapter 1: Make it 3 or 4 paragraph and have a space. It's okay, you are still learning. English is our second language. But the most important things, try your best and never give up. Arasso? Hwaiting! ^^
JiYeon_Lover #3
Chapter 1: it'll be better if the conversation, have a space.
did you wrote it with iPad???
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