Sociopaths

Description

Chunji falls into the lives of street fighters.

"Rule #1 of fight club. There are no rules."

so·ci·o·path [soh-see-uh-path, soh-shee-]

noun Psychiatry.
A person with a psychopathic personality, whose behavior is antisocial, often criminal, and who lacks a sense of moral responsibility or social conscience.
Compare psychopath.

Origin: 
1940–45; socio- + -path
 

 

Foreword

I haven't stopped working on The Hunted, Dots!!! I have the next chapter written and my co-author is editing it soon, so please be patient. ^-^ I know you will. This will probably be only 3 chapters but I got so excited about it and had to write it, before I convinced myself it was a bad idea. I'm working on Chapter 1 and hopefully I can update tonight. We'll see.
 
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ItsJustSarax #1
Chapter 3: Now, I knew Teen Top were a bunch of violent little boys, and hey I've imagined them in a gang, but shisus...fight club >:O??/ That's a first!! And I liked it ;3 (Ihonestlyexprectedzelotoendupwithjongupcuzjongloftw) nonetheless, this was awesome >:D
tintapljoe1123 #2
Chapter 3: hell yeah, i love this story
cat-turtle #3
Chapter 3: OH MY GOSH THIS STORY.

This was a really interesting, but common plot to go with. Gangs and fighting are not uncommon here on AFF, but the fight club and sociopath thing was a nice twist.

Over all, it's a really good story. I especially liked Chunji distancing himself from L.Joe, but in turn it didn't work at all. The ChunjiZelo thing was cute, but I thought it was a bit awkward. To me, neither could be the man in the relationship, so it seemed a bit weird. Chunji could play the role of the man, but when it comes down to it, he's just a little to dependent to play male role in a gay relationship. Just a little. The exception is Chunjoe, where they can interchangeably be top or bottom, but even that gets complicated, and is an almost constant switch back and forth.

The only thing I didn't like was the ending. It was weird. L.Joe with that whole confession while Zelo is still in the room? Awkward~
So, yeah he's a sociopath, but it still could have ended a little better for Chunjoe. I was half expecting L.Joe to walk off and let Chunji suffer for a few days until he breaks down and admits that he loves L.Joe.

However, redemption comes in the form of Banglo. I saw that foreshadowing at the beginning of chapter 3 and towards the end when L.Joe told Chunji to bring Zelo to fight club practice. Then B.A.P. walks in and I just squealed. Chunjoe ending wasn't the best, but Zelo get's his happily ever after.

Good enough for me!

Oh, and one more thing. I think I tend to like your shorter stories more than the longer ones like Locked Up and The Hunted. (It's just my opinion but,) Your longer stories tend to drag on a tiny bit, while the shorter ones are quicker to deliver those emotional punches. Maybe try writing a fic that's a good in-between, like 5-7ish chapters instead of 3 or 20. That's just my opinion though.
honeybooboo #4
Chapter 3: that was soo good!!!
ayumi13 #5
Chapter 3: Lol I am glad zelo has someone now!! And wow the chunjoe was cute!! There was a bit of a stIcky situation there and I had more to say but I forgot! U introduce LC9 awesOme and in the fic!!! OMG WHEN I SAW KING WITH THAT BEFORE PIC I WAS LIKE DYFFHISTGCXH SPAZZING (okay not really but sorta squealing sorta) AND I WAS LIKE YESSS HE LOOKS SOOOOOOO CUTE LIKE THAT!!!!! I just love them!!! I am guessing u have a favorite also?
Sherlockkie #6
Chapter 3: Love <333
I figured it was inspired by LC9 after first fight xD the axe scene, yea xD
my bias is J-Hyo <333 and, I totally agree about King's hair xD
As always, I just sooo love your stories <33
iceprincess96 #7
Chapter 3: A.M.A.Z.I.N.G
ljjang2409 #8
Chapter 3: Wow! It got a lil too exciting at the confrontation part haha. Perhaps it's a little short for the feelings to develop but its still amazing as hell! Love your stories!! ^^
derpie #9
Chapter 3: Ummm.....sequel?pretty please?
flowfuturistic #10
Chapter 3: ASDFGHKL OKAY OMG. I freaking loved the ending omg!!! Zelo ;; okay junhong bby go to the flirty bang yongguk HAHAHHAHA BUT OMG I THINK THIS PLOT WAS JUST PERFECT and gah l.joe you sweet sociopath HAHAHAHHA IT'S SO AWESOME SEEING CHUNJOE IN LOVE AND HAPPY ENDINGS. MY FAVOURITES OF ALL TIMES TBH <3 thank you author-nim! I LOVE THIS! <3 fighting for your other stories and love you!<3
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