A love gamble

Description

Myungsoo actually chanced a glance at Sungyeol’s face before speaking in one breath, and despite the shakiness of his arms, his voice came out much calmer than the first time.
 
“I said, Yeollie ah, can we break up?”
 
And that was it. Myungsoo gasped as coffee was splashed on to his face.

Foreword

A love gamble | Myungsoo/Sungyeol | PG | romance, angst, slight!humor | WC: 8,012.
 
A/n 1: To my two unnies, Myss and Myung_dorky, thanks a lot for always acting silly with me and being there for me when I’m in my mental breakdown. We have never actually met each other and everything is all through twitter, but just like how Myss once said, I considered you two as my sisters at some points already. And sorry too for not updating “Under invisible boundary” soon, or the fact that I haven’t printed my book yet =____= I will try to finish them later when I come back. ILYSM <3
 
A/n 2: To my two dongsaengs, Miya and Luminous_1004, this is the only possible way I could think of to cheer you up. Good luck with your graduation exam ‘kay? <3 I will be off in a while but still bring my cell phone, so I will try to keep in touch with you two for the next month. The entrance exam is getting near, I hope you can at least feel confident with it. Especially you, Miya, I still expect to see you in my university :) Oh, and btw, sorry too for not being able to deliver my books to you =_______= I will make it up later :v

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Sumayeol #1
Chapter 1: I love this
Sumayeol #2
Chapter 1: Cutree
Myungkittie #3
Chapter 1: You're perfect honestly when it comes to writing no one can beats you, even if I hate sometimes reading agsnt "ffs" because I love happy endings but I still read yours and I always ends up crying like there's no tomorrow because it's a heartbreaking...thank you for all these amazing ffs because every each one of them is meaningful and with a lot of passion, fighting and keep writing and never give up~
Myinahla #4
Chapter 1: That was seriously great ;)
Well written and all !:D

At first, I really though he wanted to break up with him because he loved someone else or something like that, just like SungYeol thought.
We follow the story with SungYeol and we discover things little by little and we jump from surprise to surprise :)
He should be glad to have so many good friends by his side all this time :D

And the ending was just perfect :D
Now they are sure that they want to stay with each other as they endured the pain of separation :D

Thank you for sharing it with us ! !:)
cyd4294
#5
Chapter 1: so cute >///<
Sheollie
#6
Chapter 1: a great story line and hidden advice for those who on a relationship^_^

nice shot ! one shot! *sang b.a.p song* LOL
Nadjell #7
Chapter 1: It was cute :3
blacktulip
#8
Chapter 1: This is.. what should I call this? Perfection? I love the way you write the story. With angst moment scattered everywhere without making too emotionally draining, and with lovely moment being thrown here and there without making it sickeningly cute. Yep, as I was saying, this is a perfection.
KuroiDaiyamondo
#9
Chapter 1: and again...like always...such an awesome story!
MyungSoo is such a puppy, following SungYeol everywhere around, even with the break up he was thinking about SungYeol that he didn't deserve SungYeol instead the other way around, MyungSoo is just too cute! =D I'm glad for the happy ending, altough when the salesman came I wanted to cry. SungYeol is such an idiot also for not checking his mails, poor Soo! =D
toukyo #10
Chapter 1: Wow, that's a long oneshot