the unannounced love

Description

krystal is new to seoul korea she came from america. she didn't know anything about korea and she was there for a reason and it was a secret. She met this guy named Lee Taemin she didn't know who he was so she was kind of rude to him. He doesn't know her secret except boa. He starts falling in love with her also his band members will there friendship be broken from this one girl or will they let one of the members have her?

Foreword

This is my first story so i hope you guys enjoy it and read until the end to find out who gets Krystal :)

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Daiatonne #1 May 31, 2013 07:35:56

Chapter 2: yeah, i will, you can ask me if you have problems :)

koyang1234 #2 May 30, 2013 18:48:19

Chapter 2: thank you for reading this and i will try my best to make it not to confusing hope you keep reading till the end

Daiatonne #3 May 30, 2013 18:15:34

Chapter 2: And what I also want to say is, if you want to still change things, so that nobody sees it, you can klick on the buttom "Hide" above the titel.

Daiatonne #4 May 30, 2013 18:10:06

I think the storyline is cinda cute, put try to make dots at the end of your sentence ('cause it's confusing) and maybe but up pictures like from tumblr, deviantart or photobucket. I would also try to make more tags, it sounds like a romance so I would take romance to the tags or maybe comedy if you think it fits to the story. Hope it help (didn't want to critic you too much), I was also a newcommer a little while ago :)