Retribution

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Leeteuk found himself growing white wings.

Kyuhyun was plotting something.

 

 

 

Not yet finished.

Kyuteuk.

Squirm in your seat and try to crack this.

Foreword

 

PROLOGUE

 

Up in the heaven, among the silver clouds and glistening lights, came beautiful angels singing in harmonious melody. Their backs graced with a pair of pure white wings, soft and basking in warm light. With graceful white robe and gorgeous face, they were divine, reflecting the might of their Creator – the Lord.

But one angel, however, seek for more. The Lord’s wings were more glamorous. The Lord’s robe was more beautiful, and His face, which shone with wisdom and power, could not be compared to any angels.

The angel was envious. The feeling dripped inside his vein, slowly sullying his pure thoughts with black stains. His eyes were lost in the dark and he was growing mad with jealousy.

He wanted to become the Lord.

But his plan ended up futile. He lost the battle, and his gathered army was running away. Earth, that was the destination. It was a fitting place. It was once empty but now filled with mortals called human.

He was falling hard and fast. His eyes which dulled by filth and sins, managed to take the last glance at heaven before he was being pulled down harshly to the land. His once pure white wings burned into flames, leaving them as black and grim color. His memories were gone, but he remembered one thing:

Hatred.

‘Revenge,’ he thought as his body slumped above the concrete ground made of grey asphalt. His strength was depleted and his feet were giving up to the point of breaking.

The Lord did not have any mercy on evil. He would send one of his angels to search for the fallen one and banish him for eternity. But he was not afraid, no. That was very fitting to the fallen angel’s plan. When that time comes, he swore that he would search for that angel and kill him; no matter how many lifetimes he would take. Then he would rise up again, taking the throne now for himself.

That is his revenge.

‘Soon,’ he kept repeating the word inside his mind until he was finally drowned in slumber, waiting for his reborn. 

 

 


 

 

 

This is a rewrite for my old story 'A Deep Secret'.

I'm fancied things a little bit.

Hope you enjoy this one too ^^

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TeukTeukTeuk #1
update pleasee
exsuho1004
#2
Chapter 2: Ah, kyuhyun know about leeteuk's secret. Is kyuhyun the devil? Actually, I don't know anymore. I'm going to figure it out as I read the story. This is a random thought, but those meat looks really tasty... makes me hungry.
rizukichan
#3
Chapter 2: who found who??
omg kyu please let it be a good kind of excitement. teukieeee~~ i hope he's okay.
thanks for the update. can't wait for more.
SinfulDesires
#4
Chapter 2: OH GOD! I feel like the devil himself!
I found this quite y though.. muahahahaha..
Update soon ne!!
believe #5
Chapter 1: eonnie you're back~ ^^
so you rewrite 'a deep secret'?
then I'm still looking forward for the update..
update soon eonnie :)
btw love the first chapter
Haneen #6
Chapter 1: I dont know :( i kinda of waited too long for that story to be updated... Nevertheless i love this one and i'll subscribe ofc :D any kyuteuk works with me ~*^* ~
TeukTeukTeuk #7
ahhh! you're back! yeayyy :D

i hope teukie is in bottom pleaseeee :D
SinfulDesires
#8
Chapter 1: This is cute!!
Please update soon!
And oh, like Cheonsa-angel said, I want Teukie to be the bottom one as well k!!
But Kyu is devil here rite? I love angst n tragedy.. heheh
cheonsa-angel
#9
Chapter 1: wah!!! i really waiting this story...so u rewrite 'a deep secret' i still love this story...

please update soon.... like usual...please teukie=bottom/feminine side...and kyu is manly...kyu protect leeteuk...
exsuho1004
#10
Chapter 1: ah welcome back!
There is changes in the story, it's fancier (?) than before.
I'm hoping to read more of you, I really like this story.