together (no better time)

Description

Jongin notices her for the first time when her hair trails across the woodlands and her arms represent gore.

Foreword

"It's true, I am afraid of dying. I am afraid of the world moving forward without me, of my absence going unnoticed, or worse, being some natural force propelling life on. Is it selfish? Am I such a bad person for dreaming of a world that ends when I do? I don't mean the world ending with respect to me, but every set of eyes closing with mine."
—Jonathon Safran Foer, Everything Is Illuminated | The Sky Is The Limit | Based on Suzanne Collins, Hunger Games.

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kurdoodle
#1
Chapter 1: aaahhh hungergames!kaistal i cannot ;_; they are pERFECT for these kinds of scenarios, seriously >_< and omg this is so well-written! i really really like it :)
kurdoodle
#2
ok how did i overlook this fic (i must admit i don't search the kaistal tag on here that often) but HEY remind me to read this tomorrow, hehehe <3 off to sleep~ good night anh!
royalblueblood
#3
Chapter 1: I can't even express how I feel about this story. It's just mind-blowing. The plot, the flow, the characters, their emotions, and your writing style is simply beautiful on its own!

Good luck for the contest! <3
skyward
#4
Chapter 1: omfg your writing style. ;; i love the way you write so much. you know how to point out their feelings correctly and asdfghjkl. this story is so beautiful; i'm left speechless.

/forever a noob at writing. meh
falliblefantasy
#5
Chapter 1: Soojung seems so much like Katniss here, except somewhat different. She has this air of indifference and an intriguing presence. Your imagery is beautiful here. :) As much as it was predictable at some moments, your style of writing made it stand out. Really enjoyed this story! ;)
mountaine
#6
Chapter 1: ;__;
so freaking beautiful.
it's amazing. you write very well in the visual area. and the emotions...the emotions of each character are there. and what do you mean this can only be read once? it's worth rereading dude!
krystalarity
#7
Chapter 1: Seriously? Two comments? TWO COMMENTS FOR THIS AWESOMENESS? (Well ok, three counting mine). This oneshot was awesome though, no lies. I can totally see all this happening and I'm just a er for angst. I'm not a fan of the hunger games though but this was pretty cool. I would totally recommend this fic to people.
Well it's 2AM and I'm up reading this
/sigh.
Where am I going with my life? ;n;
usniverse
#8
Chapter 1: Soojung is somehow suitable, really suitable for the character of katniss. This is very beautiful. And being a big fan of hunger games as always, i love this fic a lot
KrystalHana #9
Chapter 1: i don't know if it's because i just watched the hunger games movie for the second time when i read this or what but this is awesome ;~;
a thg fic right after a thg movie is just what i need ;~; and now i am overwhelmed by these feels ;A;

i love the little pact they made even though they weren't from the career district. like they don't care about winning, they only want to survive. and and and i really really love that there was a little moment of sehun and sulli cuz they're one of my otps which just make this fic more and more awesome ;~;
and i'm still confused as to how sehun died. i assumed it was of a broken heart?
and and and and the last bit when they died together was albeit predictable, still so touching ;~;

this is so great and i hope to see another kaistal fic from you again :DDD