Chapter 1: Well it was certainly artistic, what with the lofty metaphors and imagery. I agree that this would work well in a fluff story (that's what I thought I was reading tbh). It's almost like Yongguk is placing Junhong on a pedestal here, and I can't help but think that pedestal will come crashing down; but it didn't, because you kept this light and airy. I'm going to admit though that while I liked this artistic experimentation, it was a bit much for me (going back to what I said about Junhong being on a pedestal). I feel like Junhong's childish side was built up so much.
Chapter 1: [You and your harrassment] Wahhh... I like this new style. The description was great. This kind of writing is the most powerful. . You're so damned good at it. I'd love to see this writing style in a fluff story. That combo would make my heart just flutter and burst.
Chapter 1: I like this story, its probably the most artistic fic I've ever read from this site. And I also like the pics especially the first one. Is that your backyard or something? :D
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