Chapter 22: Hmm. I think for Sealed Fate, you could have made her picture darker. You can do that by creating a black overlay layer. ^^ And for the first one, your blending skills could still be better. c: When blending, you should leave a little bit of the background on and then just use textures to make it blend better with the background. And as for the pictures you chose, I think you could use some editing on those alone so that their colors are as vibrant and so that they really pop to the eyes more than the background you chose does. Other than that, well done. ^^v
Chapter 21: Wahhh, you've gotten so much better while I was gone! ^^;; EVERYTHING has improved and I'm EXTREMELY impressed. XD Daebak!! Your posters don't need my advice anymore. ^^v
Chapter 18: There's definitely been some improvement, but for "Hidden In The Shadows", try using a different color for the font so that you can see it and for "Our Fait", erase some of the textures around her face so that you can see it better. ^^ other than that, everything looks good. :D good job on these two!
Chapter 12: There's definitely been some more improvement but I'm not going to point out anything out in specific because it's the same tiny mistakes as before so nothing for me to say! You're definitely improving though! ^^v
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