Chapter 2: "i'll never really know, but THEY..." you wrote hey there. mistype xD also, "each other's pillar"
that aside...OH MI GAWD! that was absolutely brilliant T.T shed tears. very angsty. very well written. what more can i say? that was so satisfying on so many levels. and again, it's so poetic and powerful; it makes me want to scream. did i say 1% last time? oh, my bad. i meant 0.01%. god! your writing is so good! soso good! goosebumps on how good this is. gosh.
i'm guessing this chapter is dedicated to Sunny's brother and how he broke down. again, such a powerful chapter. if this continues on with the flow, Sunny is going to be at her brother's funeral next chapter? if that really happens, does it mean that chapter one is like a outline of Sunny's life? dammi...if so then she's gonna be lead down a dark path T.T i don't think i can stomach that, seeing as how realistic your writing is! TEACH ME PLS! xD

Chapter 1: oh wow. this was really powerful. i really like the vagueness of it, because it leaves me thinking the other possibilities of it all. and if you do continue this, i hope Sunny doesn't become what i think she'll become...that'll be sad T.T