A Belief in Vision

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Taemin only believes in the things he can see.

Foreword

 

 

This is a two-part story for Nemo (OnceUponATaem).

[ x-posted at ichinori@LJ ]

 

Story and Poster by nikatsu/aoza 2013. Image from Flickr. All rights reserved. Distribution of any kind is prohibited without the written consent of nikatsu/aoza. The following is a work of fiction. The events and characters are fictional and the celebrity names/images merely borrowed and do not represent who the celebrity is in real life. No offence is intended towards them, their families or friends.

 

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veni-vidi-vici
#1
Chapter 2: OMG THIS IS SO HEARTBREAKINGLY BEAUTIFUL CUZ I NEVER EXPECTED SOOJUNG TO BE A GHOST AND TAEMIN TO HOLD ONTO HER LIKE THAT AND THAT WHY HE WAS BEING SUCH A DOUCHE AT THE BEGINNING.
THIS GOT MY EYES TO TEAR UP AT THE END WHEN THEY WERE MAKING HER A MEMORIAL WITH JINRI'S SANDWICHES AND WHEN YOU MENTIONED THE PROSPECT OF JINRI AND SOOJUNG BEING PARTNERS IN CRIME, I WAS LIKE IT WOULD'VE BEEN A PERFECT OT4 IF SHE WAS ALIVE TT-TT
BESIDES THAT, I LOVED SOOJUNG SO MUCH IN THIS, EVEN IF SHE WAS A GHOST, EVEN THOUGH I MIGHT IMAGINE HER AS AS GHOST FOR A COUPLE OF DAYS, BUT THE WAY SHE LOVED TAEMIN AND MADE HIM REALIZE HIS FAULTS AND LET HIM LIVE HAPPILY WITH JINRI...I LOVE HER SO MUCH
AND JINRI IS ALWAYS SO SWEET IN EVERY FIC, ALWAYS DOING HER BEST TO HELP, ALWAYS FALLING IN LOVE WITH THE FIRST GUY WHO LOVES HER. I'M GLAD THIS WAS A TAELLI FIC CUZ THEY HAVE BEEN MY OTP FOR YEARS NOW. I DESPERATELY NEED KAISTAL BUT BEFORE SEARCHING FOR KAISTAL FICS I'M GOING TO READ THE SEQUEL TO THIS. HOPEFULLY, SOME OF MY KAISTAL NEED WILL BE QUENCED WITH THAT FIC.
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS NIKKA-UNNIE. YOU MIGHT SEE MORE OF MY SPAZZ COMMENTS IN YOUR OTHER FICS CUZ I LOVE YOUR LOGIC, YOUR WAYS WITH WORDS, YOUR STORYLINES. IT'S PERFECT.
veni-vidi-vici
#2
Chapter 1: This was beautiful but I'm so utterly saddened for Soojung because even if she did like trivial, girly, materialistic things, she loved Taemin and made sure to show it with her actions. However, he didn't. Taemin is kinda a douche in this, getting over her so quickly, and acting very indifferent about the topic of how he felt/feels about her. I feel for Jongin. That selfless boy always loses.
I adore your writing style. It's very, very well-written.
kawaii-gizibe #3
Chapter 2: at first I was angry with taemin, but after a while I didn't know what to feel. Sorry for him? I felt sorry for Kai. And for Jinri and Soojung. It was no one's fault. Kai--I dont't know, he's helpless even after this. Jinri's a sweetheart and Taemin, I hope things will get better even though it will be slow. This was amazing, I like this kind of writing a lot ^^ and you mentioned changyoon haha. tae-kai-stal-lli is the best ^~^
x3saranghae
#4
Chapter 2: Wonderful to see such a great story from my favourite author! Had me crying and my heart aching. I don't know what it was but I could picture Soojung and Jinri so perfectly. Wish Kai had a happier ending though, haha. Please continue writing and being inspiring because I absolutely love your work. Cheers :)
lilianyasmine
#5
Chapter 2: Sooooo good authornim! Congrats for this story. The plot is so smooth yet unpredictable. Oh I ship taelli btw and this story is just so sweet of them. Hope to read your other awesome stories. Hwaiting!!
coffeejelik
#6
Chapter 2: beautiful story <3 the way ghost-soojung speaks to taemin is just ;~;
what i like the most is his friendship with kai even after everything
really, really love this story :)
snsdobsessed
#7
Chapter 2: i love this ending, the resolution and all :D